on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
1 Jan 2003, 10:59 PM
this has good ideas, but seems very unfinished
on TRIBUTE TO A FRIEND by Nicholas Monson
5 Dec 2002, 7:21 AM
entertaining. but i think you could do it better--it's choppy in places, and i have seen that you possess command enough to mend this.
on Second Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29
1 Jan 2003, 10:33 PM
huh?
on ... by logun2002ya
1 Jan 2003, 10:34 PM
eye think you're wright
on If I Could by little_angel_maria
1 Jan 2003, 10:36 PM
hey maria, nice to see you writing and rhyming. :]
on HATTIE by Nicholas Monson
5 Dec 2002, 7:19 AM
great metaphors. ironically, i feel the affection and cautious lack of attractions. well-crafted, sir.
on broken bottles by richa
30 Nov 2002, 4:56 PM
gracious, this is gorgeous.
on Happy hour by flatliner
18 Nov 2002, 6:10 PM
amen.
(but it's altar)
(but it's altar)
on The Funnyman by Christof
1 Nov 2002, 8:05 AM
everyone has their own tropical spring these days, now don't they? how would we get on without them?
on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
22 Oct 2002, 10:23 AM
sounds like a lovely place to saty away from, nicholas. here, have a 9 for being so convincing.
on The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar
22 Oct 2002, 10:43 AM
what about she-men? won't they feel excluded?
on Smoking Clitoris with PHD handles by <{Baba^Yaga}>
8 Oct 2002, 3:41 PM
cravat. you mean cravat, don't you?
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2002, 11:23 AM
schwing. slam. fantastic.
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2002, 12:18 PM
Do you keep these used up and discarded men in your room? I got a vision of 'bedroom as entymology lab' with all these man-sized pins sticking them to the walls...oh, dear. must remember to take my medecine.
on lovely by pink_punk_kisses87
17 Sep 2002, 9:53 AM
necrophiliac. "A Rose for Emily" and one for pink-punk-kisses as well! Hurrah! still, it's evocative. Graceful-ly (you need the -ly). And, what 'other' do the eyes gently fall upon? Aren't they closed?
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom
13 Sep 2002, 9:05 AM
Wow. How poetical. I hadn't realized poemranker was a forum for this kind of thing. Couldn't you have written it in such a way so that it was self-explanatory? Wouldn't that have been the better option, instead of lashing out like this? Honestly, it wasn't very much of an effort. Why be so angry in your defense of it? Did you ever thinkg that they (the idiots, that is, were provoking you because the poem itself does nothing but make them cring? Sorry to be so harsh, but jeez!
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2002, 12:43 PM
still there p&k?
on recent submissions by <~>
22 Oct 2002, 10:13 AM
amen
We have indeed come far.
I liked this. not sure why, but I liked it alot.