regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jan-03/10:55 PM
"Cabbage , or, the American Dream." We have indeed come far. I liked this. not sure why, but I liked it alot.
Re: joyriding by Bill Z Bub	1-Jan-03/10:59 PM
this has good ideas, but seems very unfinished
Re: TRIBUTE TO A FRIEND by Nicholas Monson	5-Dec-02/7:21 AM
entertaining. but i think you could do it better--it's choppy in places, and i have seen that you possess command enough to mend this.
Re: Kindling by <~>	11-Nov-02/6:41 PM
what is up with the zeros? are you dead inside?
Re: Second Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29	1-Jan-03/10:33 PM
huh?
Re: ... by logun2002ya	1-Jan-03/10:34 PM
eye think you're wright
Re: If I Could by little_angel_maria	1-Jan-03/10:36 PM
hey maria, nice to see you writing and rhyming. :]
Re: HATTIE by Nicholas Monson	5-Dec-02/7:19 AM
great metaphors. ironically, i feel the affection and cautious lack of attractions. well-crafted, sir.
Re: broken bottles by richa	30-Nov-02/4:56 PM
gracious, this is gorgeous.
Re: Happy hour by flatliner	18-Nov-02/6:10 PM
amen. (but it's altar)
Re: The Funnyman by Christof	1-Nov-02/8:05 AM
everyone has their own tropical spring these days, now don't they? how would we get on without them?
Re: Stockport by Nicholas Jones	22-Oct-02/10:23 AM
sounds like a lovely place to saty away from, nicholas. here, have a 9 for being so convincing.
Re: The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar	22-Oct-02/10:43 AM
what about she-men? won't they feel excluded?
Re: Smoking Clitoris with PHD handles by <{Baba^Yaga}>	8-Oct-02/3:41 PM
cravat. you mean cravat, don't you?
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-02/11:23 AM
schwing. slam. fantastic.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Sep-02/12:18 PM
Do you keep these used up and discarded men in your room? I got a vision of 'bedroom as entymology lab' with all these man-sized pins sticking them to the walls...oh, dear. must remember to take my medecine.
Re: lovely by pink_punk_kisses87	17-Sep-02/9:53 AM
necrophiliac. "A Rose for Emily" and one for pink-punk-kisses as well! Hurrah! still, it's evocative. Graceful-ly (you need the -ly). And, what 'other' do the eyes gently fall upon? Aren't they closed?
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	13-Sep-02/9:05 AM
Wow. How poetical. I hadn't realized poemranker was a forum for this kind of thing. Couldn't you have written it in such a way so that it was self-explanatory? Wouldn't that have been the better option, instead of lashing out like this? Honestly, it wasn't very much of an effort. Why be so angry in your defense of it? Did you ever thinkg that they (the idiots, that is, were provoking you because the poem itself does nothing but make them cring? Sorry to be so harsh, but jeez!
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-02/12:43 PM
still there p&k?
Re: recent submissions by <~>	22-Oct-02/10:13 AM
amen