on the way things are goin' by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:23 AM
lol funny
on sewer rat by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:21 AM
like the richness of ur poems..
on Fastened to my belt by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:27 AM
need more writers like you.
on Caducus (destined to fall) by Caducus
19 Nov 2004, 7:35 PM
liked it
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
19 Nov 2004, 7:36 PM
lol...
on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
19 Nov 2004, 7:37 PM
best among the worst?
on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2004, 7:39 PM
YIKES. what happened?
on This is Bad by newagepoet2000
19 Nov 2004, 7:41 PM
lol yea, it's bad.. but it made me laugh!
on Breakfast by flouredweevle
19 Nov 2004, 7:46 PM
maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...
but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol
but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol
on A song by fatmansinging
19 Nov 2004, 8:43 PM
that, my friend, is a fat man singing
on some deleted poem
19 Nov 2004, 8:47 PM
not bad... but i think (just a guess) you'll do better without rhyming.
on Outhouse by newagepoet2000
19 Nov 2004, 9:12 PM
i think the point of the last line was to rhyme? dunno. even that,... lol funny
on No recalculations needed by Bachus
20 Nov 2004, 12:13 AM
interesting poem... hope your other poems are better! :)
on "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus
20 Nov 2004, 12:18 AM
it was not bad.
on firelight lost by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:19 AM
mamamia... lol that was good!
on Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick
20 Nov 2004, 1:49 AM
i think you have too many dots... it interferes with the other dots, don't u think? lol
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2004, 7:27 PM
lol