replying on This is Bad by newagepoet2000
20 Nov 2004, 7:31 PM
lol yea... and that makes it so good
on Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick
20 Nov 2004, 1:49 AM
i think you have too many dots... it interferes with the other dots, don't u think? lol
on Fastened to my belt by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:27 AM
need more writers like you.
replying on advice to innovators by (m)ee cummings by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:24 AM
lol post it, shuushin, and i'll vote for you instead of irishfolksuicide!
on the way things are goin' by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:23 AM
lol funny
on sewer rat by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:21 AM
like the richness of ur poems..
on firelight lost by irishfolksuicide
20 Nov 2004, 12:19 AM
mamamia... lol that was good!
on "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus
20 Nov 2004, 12:18 AM
it was not bad.
on No recalculations needed by Bachus
20 Nov 2004, 12:13 AM
interesting poem... hope your other poems are better! :)
on Outhouse by newagepoet2000
19 Nov 2004, 9:12 PM
i think the point of the last line was to rhyme? dunno. even that,... lol funny
on A song by fatmansinging
19 Nov 2004, 8:43 PM
that, my friend, is a fat man singing
on Breakfast by flouredweevle
19 Nov 2004, 7:46 PM
maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...
but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol
but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol
on This is Bad by newagepoet2000
19 Nov 2004, 7:41 PM
lol yea, it's bad.. but it made me laugh!
on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
19 Nov 2004, 7:37 PM
best among the worst?
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
19 Nov 2004, 7:36 PM
lol...
on Caducus (destined to fall) by Caducus
19 Nov 2004, 7:35 PM
liked it
on The Big NO by alexander
19 Nov 2004, 7:31 PM
it was... O.K.. i like your other poem, "sunshine" better..