on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2002, 10:08 AM
Right, here's hoping my vote won't entail a new edit...
on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2002, 5:35 PM
Far, far from your best.
on witch's bliss by crin
22 Oct 2002, 11:44 AM
'Killing little white lies...' I like that.
on Never more by Mutant_X
21 Oct 2002, 6:12 PM
-=Dark_Angel=-, one would think you'd like something that's such shite.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 11:15 AM
I don't find it absurd enough. And the rhymes are a bit clunky. But 'tis silly, and that is good.
on Regime Change by Nicholas Jones
22 Oct 2002, 11:24 AM
The sentiments are admirable, but the saying of them needs work.
on Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed by horus8
22 Oct 2002, 11:25 AM
At first, I read 'Prodding me with the big cat'. I like that image. Not that the rest is bad.
on Just For Today by apples_tim
22 Oct 2002, 11:42 AM
'Gather ye rosebuds while ye may'... didn't Herrick write that? About five hundred years ago? And I'll take pride in my madness if I want to, thank you very much.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 11:46 AM
Second to last stanza extremely weak.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 11:12 AM
I can't help it, with the way I speak, I find it extremely difficult to make 'China' rhyme with 'climber'. Maybe if you spelt it 'climbah' I'd prefer it. Amusing, though.
on Playing Games by ThoughtfulSoul
21 Oct 2002, 6:52 PM
'Tallying' the points, I assume. And it should be 'would HAVE told me'. Sorry. I'm a pedant.
on My Friend? by Blade
21 Oct 2002, 5:37 PM
This must be the most idiotic thing ever posted on this site -- including all the various rants from people leaving. If 'twas at least well-written, and amusing -- but this is beneath contempt.
on requiem for an ex-girlfriend by natalie
21 Oct 2002, 6:50 PM
OH MY GOD!!! Another student!!! Will Blabbitt survive? I find it needs work, especially from 'because cancer was' onwards.
on angel by little_angel_maria
21 Oct 2002, 10:10 AM
These works of yours really would read much better as songs than as poems, somehow.
on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2002, 9:59 AM
Hmmm... you definitely do need help, I agree...
on some deleted poem
21 Oct 2002, 10:00 AM
Hee hee. Methinks we've found the John Cage of Poemranker... Much better than the others.
on The generosity of others. by darby pyn
21 Oct 2002, 10:01 AM
'Hang the messenger' is excellent. Nice twist on the normal phrase.
on Strong by little_angel_maria
21 Oct 2002, 10:05 AM
Can we discriminate against Asians? And don't forget that your dear friend blade will want to drink your blood. I fail to see how you will stop me from being rude, saying your poems are crap (this one actually seems a bit better than the others. Would almost make an amusing song, with some work), or killing America.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 11:18 AM
I'll take Wilde's version of the same images, thanks.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 11:13 AM
In full agreement with God's Wife here. The second is particularly annoying.