on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 11:20 AM
Almost funny. Almost.
on Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof
23 Oct 2002, 6:29 AM
This is rather amusing. I hope that's not a bad comment.
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 11:21 AM
Redundant.
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 11:21 AM
That's not much of a revelation.
on Transfixed (#2) by Christof
23 Oct 2002, 6:31 AM
'A broken spine of cloud' is genius. Sheer.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
23 Oct 2002, 6:33 AM
The fact that it actually sounds like a set of instructions makes it gain a lot. Quite wondrous. Cheers.
on Noblesse Oblige by Christof
23 Oct 2002, 6:49 AM
Cromwell was a great socialist. He's the only person in history to manage to get the English, Scots and Irish to agree on something and work together. Unfortunately for him, that thing was hatred of Cromwell. Oh well, you can't have everything, I guess.
on Our New Tongue by Christof
23 Oct 2002, 6:20 AM
'The husk of your voice' is wonderful. I rather like this.
on futile existence by chinstrap
23 Oct 2002, 6:12 AM
-=Dark_Angel=- may like it, but all in all, he's much better at it than you are.
on The Astronomer's Lament by Christof
23 Oct 2002, 6:25 AM
You get many points for using light-years correctly. And more because it's good.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 6:14 PM
What the bloody hell is 'deafing' supposed to be?
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 1:28 PM
So cliched, -=Dark_Angel=-... You're starting to let me down. Since 'Childe of my Buttocks', you really haven't been up to standard. I'm dissapointed in you.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 12:20 PM
Good for you.
on Me and She. by peach835
22 Oct 2002, 11:48 AM
Eee. I hope this is meant to be a joke. Line eleven doesn't rhyme. And what's 'sinse'?
on Your Mama by jessicazee
22 Oct 2002, 11:55 AM
The last stanza is terrible. the first two funny.
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2002, 12:46 PM
I like the first stanza enough, but the last two leave quite quite indifferent. Sorry.