on a genius by moonUnit
16 Oct 2002, 7:03 AM
The ending is so damn boring...
on some deleted poem
12 Oct 2002, 9:10 PM
I admit I really like the idea.
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2002, 6:49 AM
Aww, how sweet. Good to know you're going.
on ~*Broken Soul*~ by Katie
16 Oct 2002, 6:15 PM
Giveme one single, good, understandable and worthwhile argument for the addition of those ridiculous tildes and asterixes in the title. Just one.
on The Way It Is by Tascobar
16 Oct 2002, 11:20 AM
'Spoken without thought'? My foot. If it's spoken without thought, then it's not a taunt. It's a spoken thought. Taunts are thought up and used deliberatly. Like what I'm saying now.
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2002, 5:47 PM
K??dresh be right... it is 'aphrodIsiac'. If you're going to edit these to remove all previous votes, limonade sweetheart, why not take the opportunity to fix those tiny, rare, ever-so-occasional typos? Just wondering. I still adore the first line. Oh, and the rest is excellent too.
on like love in the movies by crin
16 Oct 2002, 6:47 AM
I'll hope the music to this is good. It might just save it.
on Dying for a Dowry by Blue Magpie
16 Oct 2002, 7:01 AM
Humanity hasn't sunk this low, it's simply always been this low and never risen higher.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 11:56 AM
''Twas' doesn't seem to fit.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 11:52 AM
I'm not sure if I like it as much anymore. (And what I meant in my earlier comment was 'it might work better', not 'it might work work')
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 11:57 AM
'The horizon/Untouched/Hangs/Ivory tusks' is wonderful.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 11:35 AM
Not bad in the slightest. The first time I read it, I thought it might work work if you inversed the final two lines, but on rereading it I noticed it works fine as it is.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Oct 2002, 8:57 PM
Ah, -=Dark_Angel=-! You always post such wondrous, sheer, unadulterated shit. (I'm assuming you'll take this as a compliment.)
on Happy hour by flatliner
12 Oct 2002, 9:12 PM
Altar, AltAr, ALTAR!!! Why the hell can'T people figure out it's spelt with a second 'a'? Yeezhus. (Sorry, sorta. I've seen a lot of this in poems lately.)
on some deleted poem
9 Oct 2002, 7:48 PM
Nice, nice. However, the pay phone seems a sudden break that doesn't match. The first three stanzas are wonderful (the first is particularly delicious) and the final one wonderfully evocative. But hte pay phone doesn't seem to match the other images -- thoguh I see its purpose.
on On a chill morning by razorgrin
16 Oct 2002, 11:12 AM
This is not bad at all. Just one little thing -- you come out the house, turn around the corner, look at him, drive off -- wait a minute, when did you get into the car?
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2002, 5:42 PM
I assume that's 'Seldom' (third from last line).
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2002, 6:31 PM
-=Dark_Angel=- shall be proud...