on A Buncha Dungeons and Dragons Haiku by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 8:07 PM
First I must deal with your talking about nothing else when I see you, then I must deal with it in your poetry... Bah. See if I ever make you a CD again. I give you points because it's funny, remove some points because I'm sick of the subject, add some because it's amusing to see your conversation put in poetry, and remove some because I've heard it all before. Love 'n' kisses. Really.
on Ten new questions from Dan Rather by horus8
28 Feb 2003, 6:55 AM
Number one: you forgot 'deliberately mispronounce' his name as well.
on balthazar by UnityMitford
28 Feb 2003, 6:54 AM
This is much much better if you mean 'burning bridges' literally.
replying on Sleepy Geek by razorgrin
27 Feb 2003, 8:00 AM
Probably, yes. If not, I'll just bludgeon.
on Gargamel & Azriel by Bachus
26 Feb 2003, 1:32 PM
Azrael, Azrael, AzraEl, AZRAEL!!! Why is there not one English person on fifty who can remember the damn cat's name, and not one that seems to be able to spell it???
replying on Earthly Delights? by razorgrin
26 Feb 2003, 7:50 AM
You know, dear creature, it's not good form to admit to giving out zeroes out of jealousy and hurt feelings.
replying on Sleepy Geek by razorgrin
26 Feb 2003, 7:37 AM
Ooh! Can I help?
replying on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
25 Feb 2003, 5:37 PM
Umm... that was eleven... twelve if you count the sentence previous...
on Sleepy Geek by razorgrin
25 Feb 2003, 10:02 AM
Hee hee... I remember that evening. Sorry I couldn't do anything about it for you.
on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
19 Feb 2003, 10:32 AM
The last one is excellent, but the other two don't seem as great, m'dear. Possibly because they don't really let people figure out what they're about as well as the others do.
on Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin
19 Feb 2003, 10:28 AM
Sweetheart, sweetheart, sweetheart. Th'art a very sick child. One of the better crops, indeed.
on The Long Walk Back by Jigg
11 Feb 2003, 6:14 PM
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
on Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin
10 Feb 2003, 1:45 PM
Tee hee.
replying on Three Daughters by <~>
7 Feb 2003, 8:53 PM
Oops... sorry about that, I didn't see this during the past week. I'd love to, but not right now, as I'm too tired to do it honour. Tomorrow or the next day, or something like that. Just one comment I will toss into the ring right now, though: Why does the tense change halfway through? Just wondering.
replying on Love Under Will by Tyriana
5 Feb 2003, 6:08 PM
But now it seems too short. Something's missing. I think the third stanza was needed, just in need of work.
on Love Under Will by Tyriana
5 Feb 2003, 1:26 PM
Brava... that's rather magnificent. The third stanza seems a bit weak, howe'er.
on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin
2 Feb 2003, 6:01 PM
Dammit, that title. Argh. That would make such a wonderful stretto. And I can't use it because I'd be stealing it. Erg.
Oh, and tell Limonade I'm sorry about the hamster. Really I am.
Oh, and tell Limonade I'm sorry about the hamster. Really I am.
on Three Daughters by <~>
1 Feb 2003, 9:00 PM
That's really quite gorgeous. Or maybe it's jsut that I'm a sucker for that sort of story. Saying that something isn't a poem because it's a story is ridiculous -- among other things, it means that the Divine Comedy isn't poetry. And you use archaic words, which is also good. Full cheers, dammit.
on Secret, Admirer by <~>
1 Feb 2003, 8:57 PM
'pizzicato slurs...' Damnright brilliant. Slurred pizzicati... DAMN but that's a great image.
on drum circle by <~>
1 Feb 2003, 8:48 PM
Hmmm. I never thought I'd end up using this comment on someone, but it seems to be trying too hard. Lovely, though.