on After Halloween by Limness
13 Sep 2002, 8:57 AM
hm...interesting poem indeed. There's some things I myself would change but over all... i'll rate a 7/10 =)
on Satisfaction by Ojiboch
13 Sep 2002, 8:33 AM
over all it pretty good, try to add more detail =)
on fairy tale by jlanza
13 Sep 2002, 8:39 AM
It could use a little work, the idea is nice, but the structer could use some work. 7/10 =)
on the art of dreaming (screaming) by brazen
13 Sep 2002, 9:07 AM
I agree with the changes that have been sujested to you, shoule should edit it a lttle, and see what you come up with 5/10 =)
on she wonders, by <~>
13 Sep 2002, 8:29 AM
Um...WTF!! spoon her. yeah..okay
on Oh Well III by RWAndersen
13 Sep 2002, 8:36 AM
I like the flow, but like the last line, maybe change it a little. But the rest, basically, I liked =) 9/10
on Torn... by loneshadow29
13 Sep 2002, 12:25 PM
dark indeed. But i do like it 10/10 =)
on Come Back to Me by jlanza
13 Sep 2002, 8:38 AM
!! love it, it's cute, but not complicated, there's some parts I would fix, but besides that I love it! 9/10!! =)
on Curse by OneFingerAnswer
13 Sep 2002, 8:54 AM
=) I like it, not complicated, but yet it's still a wonderfull poem, cootos!! 9/10 =)
on Dream Walker by Tekara
13 Sep 2002, 8:55 AM
the meaning I love, the poem on the other is hand, is nice, but not quit...flowing? But over all i'll give you a 7/10 =)
on Oh Well by RWAndersen
13 Sep 2002, 8:59 AM
there's some spelling boo-boo's, but hell there alot in mine too! Bue over all, I love this poem! so i give you a 1/10! My true vote wil be a 8/10!!
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2002, 9:10 AM
Um...I don't understand it, not all of you lines are in Haiku formatting. so 5/10, I'm a genrus person =)
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2002, 11:31 AM
This is a very interesting poem. I'd give it a 1/10 JK!! I'll give it a 7/10 =) <3 katie
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 Sep 2002, 9:14 AM
ich denken er hat ein zeigen dort, du wissen" you proclaim you know German, so tell me what does that mean?
on would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil
13 Sep 2002, 6:38 AM
=)
on Oh Well II by RWAndersen
13 Sep 2002, 9:03 AM
I like this poem. There are things i would change, but no one, or no poem is ever perfect. I'll give you a solid 8/10 =)
on Torn... by loneshadow29
13 Sep 2002, 12:25 PM
dark indeed. But i do like it 10/10 =)
on None by poemreader
13 Sep 2002, 6:44 AM
=)