on ... by logun2002ya
28 Oct 2002, 10:46 AM
hm...logun...I like...it's slow yet easy...but I like it...simple yet interesting...9 for ya ^._.^
replying on Midnight Dream by Katie
25 Oct 2002, 5:10 AM
If you didn't pay attention to the comment I mad after Miggy's, It's A JOKE!! With me and one of my friends Jeff. But I do agree with your point.
replying on Midnight Dream by Katie
16 Oct 2002, 1:43 PM
No worries Miggy, it didn't happen, it's just a joke me and my friend Jeff have. I didn't expect it to do as well as it as, but I am glad it did, and I got some interesting reponses from it!! But sorry no I'm not some chick that goes out cybering, I myself find it childish, and...ewww'ish!! =) hehe.
on A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke
14 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM
Interesting point of view tom...interesting...lol...hehe But I like bumblebees, hehe so I give yeah a 10 =) hehe go bumblebees!!
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God, won't you guy's please stop bickering...if you haven't noticed the point of this site is to post your poems, and help other peolpe fix theres. Blade, don't listen to some of the asses on this site, It's a nice poem, yes it does need some touchs up, but other than that I like it. I give it a ~*5*~ =)
on Dilemma of a Crip by Ninoy_Instigator
10 Oct 2002, 9:33 AM
Cript is a big gang where i'm from, there everywhere, and most people here are scared of them. I do know guy's that are just like what you said in your poem...but there haveing a hard time getting out, it's not as easy as it says, but now about the poem, I like your idea for this...it's something no one else here so far I believe has tried, yet stuff like that happens in life...alot. I give it a 7/10 =)
on Which Side of Darkness by Wulf
9 Oct 2002, 7:12 AM
I'm sorry i didn't see this poem sooner. I love the poem you have writen here. It's an interesting perseptive, and flow. 10/10 =) And I can't wait to read more of your work =)
on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
9 Oct 2002, 5:02 AM
um...dang it...nope I can't say I can whisel my way out of that one DA, but still mocking me with out a jk, or indicating that you where 'messin' around. LoL!! =) and I know your not slow...and I don't mean to give off this Bitch aperience...and good poem Anthony
replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
8 Oct 2002, 10:38 AM
You know dark angel get a life, dang it. I was messing around for anyone who is to slow to figure that out...not saying any names (DA)
on Sanity's Defeat by loneshadow29
8 Oct 2002, 10:00 AM
Brandon, another great poem! I like the feel of this one, I like the point of the whole thing. This poem was really interesting to me. Keep up the good work brandon!! And good luck at work!!
on A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator
7 Oct 2002, 6:51 PM
Snif Snif...I'm going to cry...that's so sweet!! she's a lucky girl, damn I won't a guy to write a poem for me, but the only thing they think of is how the hell there gonna get me in bed...but ne ways, LOL I love this poem, hehe I love your work!! 10/10 =)
on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
7 Oct 2002, 6:45 PM
Okay...I'm a blonde!! I'm not a bembo :( snif snif, not all us blondes are little whores you know? I'm not vein, but I am attractive, and I'm still a virgine...Imagine that...and I'm not a slut :) so not all blondes are bad, hehe. Okay enough of that, I get what you are reffering too. But besides that I love you poem!! I can't wait to read more of your work!! 9/10 =)
on Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29
7 Oct 2002, 1:00 PM
Hey shadow! Long time no see!! Well I've been waiting for your next poem then...there it is. hehe. Well hm...you should know me by now...I don't like when people go on about nothing, just mindless chitter chatter...it bugs the heck out of me, and it's just a waste of space. But this poem isn't like that!!! =) I love it, great poem, and I like your point of view! 9/10 =)
replying on Wondering Soul by Katie
30 Sep 2002, 8:36 AM
Never did I say I wanted this to make sence, and I could find proper adjectives, but I rather leave it as is =) Oh yeah, and I like to add I liek English, but I'm not good at it =)
on Wedding Day... by loneshadow29
24 Sep 2002, 4:30 AM
I like the idea of this poem, it's one no one else here has tried, So it's something new for a change. and even if you don't like it..well it means something to him anyway, so unless you have something nice to say, or advice to make the poem any better, then don't say anything at all. I think it's a great poem shadow! =)
on A Gift of Beauty... by loneshadow29
24 Sep 2002, 4:24 AM
*snif*snif, that's so pretty!! It's a 10 all the way
on My Gift to You by loneshadow29
19 Sep 2002, 4:45 AM
*snif, snif* It's so...beautiful. I like!! 9/10
on Words Only of Love by loneshadow29
19 Sep 2002, 4:40 AM
Awww. I like this poem shadow! Cute, sweet, it's just awwww. LoL. good work. 9/10
on Life : Paradox by amateurR
13 Sep 2002, 12:26 PM
Me like!! 10/10 great poem indeed =)
But Iv run out of tears
Because crying in the rain
Never makes the pain disappear, it's just a thought, and I think maybe if you go through this poem one more time, and try to clean it up some, it would be a beautiful poem! But other than that, I must say I like it =)