poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ALChemy (1661-1680) and replies

Comments byALChemy, 1661–1680 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Seekers by Dovina 25 Sep 2005, 9:33 AM
It's probably just hoping no beavers come by and start chewing on it.
replying on Elmer's Last Try by Dovina 25 Sep 2005, 9:11 AM
For Bush or for the poem?

No matter. Same answer.

What should I vote on?

Brevity-8
Grammar-9
Vividness-6
Compared to your other poetry-4
Soap opera-ness-10
on untitled Rubiyat 1 by starkfister 21 Sep 2005, 2:50 PM
Interesting rhyme pattern.
on Light by Quarton 21 Sep 2005, 2:37 PM
Like Dovina said nice metaphor.
This shows the duality between human nature and science. Science has no compassion but human nature has its moments.
Your still improving. Which is more than most of us can say.
on Elmer's Last Try by Dovina 21 Sep 2005, 1:55 PM
You forgot to end with th-th-th-that's all folks.



Sorry I tried so hard to resist it but failed.
on "46 million babies a year" by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21 Sep 2005, 1:46 PM
Shitty poem.
replying on Castle in the Clouds by TLRufener 19 Sep 2005, 9:40 PM
ok
on Across The Spectrum by thepinkbunnyofdoom 19 Sep 2005, 2:25 AM
Getting better.

Meter problems in stanza 2.
on Castle in the Clouds by TLRufener 19 Sep 2005, 2:21 AM
You're lying not laying.

I also think your lying the other way too.

Why shift into rhyme half way through.
on My Name Is by hottemper26 19 Sep 2005, 1:49 AM
But when will your name be poet?
on Castle of Pandas III by FreeFormFixation 19 Sep 2005, 1:47 AM
They say once you go panda you might loose a handa.
on untitled rhyme royal 1 by starkfister 19 Sep 2005, 1:43 AM
Brilliant!
on untitled by starkfister 19 Sep 2005, 1:41 AM
Your grasp of ebonics astounds me.
on Awakening by Quarton 19 Sep 2005, 1:36 AM
Getting closer.
replying on My addict by Heather Dee 19 Sep 2005, 1:23 AM
Please don't tell me it was the old Andrew Jackson school.

Sorry. Cheap shot.

But did you know the North won.

PA (where I'm from) is called the Kentucky of the north.
I also hear NC is the South Carolina of the north.
replying on Leaving Song by wilco 19 Sep 2005, 1:05 AM
I guess you have.
replying on Leaving Song by wilco 19 Sep 2005, 1:04 AM
Wait a minute!

You've seen wilco's dick?
replying on Seekers by Dovina 19 Sep 2005, 12:57 AM
Actually I just like talking about beavers.

Makes me think of pussies.



The Kitty cat kind you perves.



They both make a really tasty hair pie.
replying on Seekers by Dovina 19 Sep 2005, 12:51 AM
Certainly there's some sense of structural design in the dams.

I'm just saying maybe George Carlin is right. Maybe our major purpose for being on earth is to make plastic. Because the earth couldn't do it on its own. Doesn't that still make us part of the natural process. Just a bunch of eager beavers cutting down trees, building dams, trying to control the earth.
replying on Seekers by Dovina 16 Sep 2005, 5:48 PM
They're not random to the beavers.

PS: Thanks for not pointing out I misspelled dam. That's pathetic even by my dyslexic standards.