replying on Come Home Soon by Sunshine Conkey
29 Aug 2005, 4:32 PM
When I read your reply...i hugged my son(12yrs) for me and for you...I will light a candle for you in hopes of his safe return...:) Bethy
replying on The Stone Man by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 12:44 PM
Thanks for the compliment...nine inch nails,i clued in later lol...this is actually a part of a song i wrote for my brother...:) Bethy
replying on The Stone Man by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 12:38 PM
I wish I was young...lol...pushing the big 40 on the 7th of next month...yikes...Nine Inch Nails...sorry 'bout that...I was suffering from a brain fart!!...now I'm better...lol... and thanks for your comments :) Bethy
on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy
29 Aug 2005, 11:12 AM
Ahhh...is that what it looks like in there...excellent...:) Bethy
replying on The Moment of Over by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 10:43 AM
love your ideas...I will edit and re-post...I actually hit his car with the carton...lol...and thanks...I am glad you like it...:) Bethy
replying on The Moment of Over by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 10:36 AM
Thanks...glad you like it...it was fun to write...will be making a few changes, including yours...:) Bethy
replying on The Moment of Over by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 10:33 AM
Darkangel...I went to reply to your comments and deleted it...ARG!!!...anyhow...thanks for your comments...my mouse is now a UFO...hehehe...:)Bethy
replying on The Moment of Over by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 10:28 AM
it sure does...thanks for your comments...:) Bethy
replying on The Moment of Over by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 10:26 AM
it sure does...and thanks for your comments...got a few changes to make...and will be re-posting...tell me what ya think...:) Bethy
replying on The Moment of Over by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 10:23 AM
incerting head in bag now... lol...hiccups will vanish before yer eyes...lol...and thanks...:) Bethy
replying on The Moment of Over by Bethy
29 Aug 2005, 10:20 AM
Thanks a whole bunch Dovina, I agree, those few lines do stand out don't they...Alchemy suggested a few changes..I really like them...and will edit and re-post...:) Bethy
on American Semele (Edit) by Sasha
26 Aug 2005, 7:16 PM
This is a favorite...*10* :) Bethy
on Crisscrossing My Mind by woodstock20000
26 Aug 2005, 7:11 PM
it was both...:) Bethy
on Come Home Soon by Sunshine Conkey
26 Aug 2005, 7:02 PM
Goose bumps...*10* the last two verse are my favs...:) Bethy
on Heaven is an uninspired piece of art by Enkidu
26 Aug 2005, 6:59 PM
I really like this...it sings...it flows...:) Bethy
on Apollinaire: Mirabeau Bridge by Sasha
26 Aug 2005, 6:56 PM
Days go by me yet I stay...I like this line...This is enchanting...I can see this poem...:) Bethy *9*
replying on The Moment of Over by Bethy
26 Aug 2005, 6:01 PM
Thanks Bobjim...It is true...its why I am a single mom bringing up two little darlins on my own...:) Bethy
replying on The Big Stupid Dink :) :) by Bethy
25 Aug 2005, 3:01 PM
Thank you soooo much Zodiac...I see exactly what you mean...hence the new poem...your advice open something up inside me...stick to the topic and feel it...good words of wisdom...:) Bethy
on i was an ass by hendrimike
25 Aug 2005, 1:15 PM
one nighters look just like that...lol :) Bethy
on Lessons(revised) by bellafuego
25 Aug 2005, 1:13 PM
I have said it a thousands times...Life is the longest thing we have! good poem...:) Bethy