on To Michelle by ALChemy
19 Dec 2005, 5:08 AM
Beautifully worded.
on Prayer For The Church by sliver
19 Dec 2005, 4:59 AM
Sliver, do your best
and God will do the rest.
Keep up the good work. (10)
and God will do the rest.
Keep up the good work. (10)
on Mixed Quartet by Dovina
19 Dec 2005, 6:42 AM
You sing? a clear idea portrayed. Good.
And yes, we are all of the same race. whether purple, green or orange.
And yes, we are all of the same race. whether purple, green or orange.
on Just for Show (Suicide revised) by sliver
19 Dec 2005, 6:16 AM
spiritually speaking u have it dead right.
on philosophy of a new age by crazyknight
19 Dec 2005, 6:34 AM
I really have to strain to see the light......
Which direction is it coming from?
Which direction is it coming from?
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2005, 6:22 PM
Not bad. I am a nature lover and i appeal to themes like this rather than the emptyheaded flow of words by some poets here, which make no sense. Good work
on For Love of Baseball by Dovina
29 Dec 2005, 10:08 AM
i know nothing about baseball and am very poor at outdoor sport, so i don't think my vote would be fair. nevertheless, it is a nice poem and i think i'll vote when i connect with this properly. till then, please excuse me.
on some deleted poem
29 Dec 2005, 10:19 AM
How does one know that millions of souls fly into space?
ha ha just kidding. Good work, though. :-)
ha ha just kidding. Good work, though. :-)
on Romans 8:28 by amanda_dcosta
29 Dec 2005, 11:03 AM
Romans 8:28.... All things work for good to those that love the Lord..............
on War (edit) by zodiac
29 Dec 2005, 11:18 AM
It's good. I've read it and re-read it, and each time it sounds better.
on Memoirs of a miners son by Caducus
30 Dec 2005, 12:38 AM
Very elegantly descriptive. Except for the punctuation, i don't think i need to comment further. I admire a poet's view for what he writes. So no changes.
on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void
30 Dec 2005, 1:13 AM
Huh.... whats this about..... unable to connect with it.
on For Love of Baseball by Dovina
30 Dec 2005, 12:42 AM
I have been reading his again and again and must sqay that this is good. I like the punch in the last para.
on ghost host by elderking
30 Dec 2005, 9:57 AM
A very descriptive and powerful presentation of poetry.
on War (edit) by zodiac
30 Dec 2005, 10:28 AM
zodiac, if you're there,... get on chat.
on we hold hands when i sleep by hendrimike
30 Dec 2005, 10:37 AM
Hmmm... not very impressive. I usually like love poems, but somehow the punch is missing. I can't quite place my finger in it.
on ghost host by elderking
31 Dec 2005, 7:36 PM
Happy New Year Elderking. May the new year bring you all that your heart desires..... except ghosts. (unless you really want them.) :-)
on Romans 8:28 by amanda_dcosta
2 Jan 2006, 9:48 AM
How deep are the depths of the riches and the wisdom and the knowledge of God!
on A New Year Prayer by amanda_dcosta
8 Jan 2006, 7:16 PM
I wanted to post this poem on the 2nd Jan, unfortunately my comp crashed and afterthat I was out station. Nevertheless, it is a new year prayer for all the nations... Happy sharing!