on Breakfast by Dhanesh M Kumar
11 Mar 2006, 12:29 AM
Will have to agree with the rest. Last stanza needs fixing. I ain't a great fan of politics and war... but I think, in my opinion, you have painted quite a picture. Bones for breakfast!
on The Tale of Hominus Ominus by Blue Magpie
11 Mar 2006, 12:21 AM
Good work. You got me going till the end. I thought that this would be just some stuff written only to fill a page , ie. when I saw the length.... but you pulled it through. pretty interesting.
on Sour Apple by ecargo
10 Mar 2006, 11:52 PM
ecargo, somehow you're good. I get a taste of negativity or pessimism from your poems often, which generally I don't really like..... but somehow you have stuff that brings me back to read more of your work. Quite a bit of imagination too....
replying on =, <>, & . . . by Dovina
4 Mar 2006, 11:44 AM
It amuses me...... but I can't understand it, that's why.
replying on Just Desserts (for drnick) by ALChemy
4 Mar 2006, 11:30 AM
Drnink. Don't you think you are being biased... after all, that's what you told me.... and that's why you never voted on mine. Hmmm....I'm offended, I really am. :-) Wish I could really be.
on At Last in the Garden by ecargo
4 Mar 2006, 11:14 AM
Sings a slight depressing note. It's pretty good though! Lovely choice of words.
Dovina, this reminds me of a song...
"We are going,
heaven knows where we are going
We know we are.
We will get there
Heaven knowsthat we will get there
We know we will"
Reading your verse made this song pop up in my head.
By the way, ]where are you going to.... and chocolates are not good for you... think of all the calories and high fat content..... not a good idea. Take my advice, don't go there.
"We are going,
heaven knows where we are going
We know we are.
We will get there
Heaven knowsthat we will get there
We know we will"
Reading your verse made this song pop up in my head.
By the way, ]where are you going to.... and chocolates are not good for you... think of all the calories and high fat content..... not a good idea. Take my advice, don't go there.
on =, <>, & . . . by Dovina
4 Mar 2006, 10:55 AM
Dovina, you'd better translate this stuff or might be tempted to vote a -0- or a -1-. By the way how's life treating you. I can see you've gone bonkers from what you've written. Looks good though, if only I could decipher it. you should have made it more like morse code. would have been more interesting .