on some deleted poem
24 May 2007, 11:04 PM
rhythmic, as it should be...
on some deleted poem
24 May 2007, 11:12 PM
This is either very clever - or just too easy...can't decide yet.
on some deleted poem
17 May 2007, 1:27 AM
First Date? LMAO
Excellent, conjures up all sorts!
Excellent, conjures up all sorts!
on Portrait of the artist as [insert adjective] by Nicholas Jones
17 May 2007, 1:31 AM
Charming self portrait.
on behind the banister by FreeFormFixation
17 May 2007, 1:35 AM
Chilling.
Lyrical and a little mad.
Lyrical and a little mad.
on garden spite by skaskowski
17 May 2007, 1:37 AM
Somehow this makes me feel naked.
on some deleted poem
17 May 2007, 1:39 AM
That's about the sum of it.
on some deleted poem
17 May 2007, 1:49 AM
pucker up - lip service.
on some deleted poem
17 May 2007, 1:54 AM
urgh! I can almost smell it from here...
on Fraser Allonby Quidnam Cruris by Stephen Robins
17 May 2007, 1:56 AM
LMFAO...So that's who ate all the pies!
Looove this...
Looove this...
on C. by skaskowski
29 May 2007, 5:52 AM
"I watched your sideview-mirror split
into a thousand glassy pieces,
like the sparkly spray from
sneezing in the sunlight."
My fav description - and like these lines, movement and colour follows in every thing you've written.
into a thousand glassy pieces,
like the sparkly spray from
sneezing in the sunlight."
My fav description - and like these lines, movement and colour follows in every thing you've written.
on some deleted poem
19 May 2007, 4:09 PM
Ah! the substance of true poetry!
on Bookshop girls by Stephen Robins
19 May 2007, 4:15 PM
Bookshop boys are a tiresome lot
Corduroy trousers
And a spotted bot
Corduroy trousers
And a spotted bot
on My Soul Cries Out by amanda_dcosta
19 May 2007, 4:21 PM
There's a lot of this kind of poetry out there - standing out is a challenge.
"And erase those emotions that cause me to
Be disappointed in you."
A clever line - a definate keeper
"And erase those emotions that cause me to
Be disappointed in you."
A clever line - a definate keeper
on some deleted poem
19 May 2007, 4:27 PM
hauntingly mournful -
on Snow by MacFrantic
19 May 2007, 4:31 PM
I felt the ice
on some deleted poem
19 May 2007, 4:35 PM
harsh
on The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina
22 May 2007, 3:22 PM
Cows will be cows and nothing more - which seemed to irritate the cyclist, to the point of internal dialogue where the cyclist attempts to free them from a fence that obviously doesn't bother the cows, for they have all they need exaclty where they are. Did the cyclist also feel the cows disdain for one who would expand energy so uselessly - as the next hill offers nothing but the same as the last? I like this, and think it needs nothing but the use of imagination in the reader.
on some deleted poem
22 May 2007, 3:29 PM
The last three stanzas could possibly stand alone, with a little explanation about photography...I love the last stanza - it speaks a duality - nice!