on somebody's birthday by jay_dace
30 Jul 2002, 9:01 PM
Your mother is a total fox
on she did not by mitchski
30 Jul 2002, 9:00 PM
good werk
on Follow by unknown
30 Jul 2002, 8:57 PM
I always wanted to play football for the coach.
on The Price in December by RWAndersen
30 Jul 2002, 8:57 PM
Excellent work. You may like some of my poems.
on Her Wildfire Addiction by molly
30 Jul 2002, 8:55 PM
Oh gin..how could you treat me this way
on you're never alone by nentwined
30 Jul 2002, 8:54 PM
Why must you write poetry that taxes my memory and sanity?? Do you find that funny??
on The Forest Child by forestchild7
30 Jul 2002, 8:43 PM
good GOD you and -=Dark_Angel=- really have your personas figured out.
on mr.oates' surrender by phbiscuit
30 Jul 2002, 8:42 PM
Mr. is capitalized.
on Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman
30 Jul 2002, 8:39 PM
Just like poison in a vial, this poem is very vile
on Word Baskets by powerline
30 Jul 2002, 8:34 PM
it sucks (the poem) the spelling lacks as well.
on Cancel that thought by wlshepherd
30 Jul 2002, 8:33 PM
YOU SAUCY DANUBE MAIDEN
excellent work. But tell me: do you have any idea what a cubic yard of concrete weighs? Quite a bit. If there is ANY stage of construction that shouldn't be messed around with it is the one you describe. There is a firm in LA which specializes in cleaning up concrete spills, which happen when the molds and casts are incorrectly constructed. An accident resulting in several hundred tons of concrete to spill out of a mold can easily cost millions of dollars in repair, cleanup and damages. And women don't have a mind for that sort of thing anyway. Good work.
on Waiting for my Beautiful Woman by Win
30 Jul 2002, 8:09 PM
The line spacing is interesting but the poem doesn't say a whole lot.
on Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey
30 Jul 2002, 8:08 PM
Yeah. And there's absolutely nothing sexy about douching either (aside from the uncontrollable sobbing). Decent poem.
on CoffeeNoBody by webguy
30 Jul 2002, 8:07 PM
I agree.
on Bloody cow by ==Doylum
30 Jul 2002, 8:02 PM
Replace Sean with Bjorn, read it aloud...etc..spellcheck...good concept though.