replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2004, 7:45 PM
And if those don't work, beat it with a pipe-wrench, right?
on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:40 PM
here's a bone for your dogs.
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:39 PM
yes, yes. this is where the nutrient rich soil is. the back halls are the best. shhhhhhh.
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:37 PM
I got yer twenty pardno! Bleh. It's just after being out there for so long, you realize that they do just as much damage to their image as others do. Yet with some small adjustments, alot can change. Kudos to your pops for knowing he didn't HAVE to be a driver. Most drivers don't want to recognise this fact. I seem to be having an awful time spelling tonight.
replying on Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote
7 Jan 2004, 7:30 PM
Hmmm. I'm simple minded. And faithful. Yet, somehow, I don't feel victimized. Maybe I should have my riboflavin checked?
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:23 PM
First time I read "America" I fell in love with the Psycho jew-nut, as I call him. Have you ever seen one of Horus 8s old rants?
He had some killers. ha!
He had some killers. ha!
replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2004, 7:17 PM
I agree. I also think, "why not have several tools in ones box"
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:14 PM
I have yet to try any kind of writers block excercises (sp?).Mine usually passes within a few days, weeks, months... OH GOD!!! I'M STILL A TRUCK DRIVER!!!!Aggggg!
....and now back to our regularly scheduled programming.
I see three possibilities. In no particular order, the writers block thing (s-2), a poem about the sadness of people eating dogs(I know it's a staple, to them). And the (starving viet kids who like dog steaks) which says to me,"where are the poets who like crude poetry?". This is where I raise my hand. I heard some Ginsberg-ish echos here. Good enough? I can feel my hair silvering.
....and now back to our regularly scheduled programming.
I see three possibilities. In no particular order, the writers block thing (s-2), a poem about the sadness of people eating dogs(I know it's a staple, to them). And the (starving viet kids who like dog steaks) which says to me,"where are the poets who like crude poetry?". This is where I raise my hand. I heard some Ginsberg-ish echos here. Good enough? I can feel my hair silvering.
on BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined
7 Jan 2004, 7:00 PM
igpbgh. that is all.
on A Kiss by devilishnutcase
7 Jan 2004, 6:49 PM
Leaves? I think you mean LeaDs. (May) my lips...
Compact and honest.
Compact and honest.
replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2004, 6:43 PM
Truthfully, no joke intended. The falling penny is a good image to work with. And there really is a book with that name. and you can use the book AND still mature naturally. And the book is also very down to earth and will accelerate your growth. and and and and...... Or you don't have to. Ta!
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 6:37 PM
and please lose the acid-trippin. it just doesn't fit.
on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 6:34 PM
I hope this is a first draft. Pull a draught and pull in the laces on this new shoe.
on Black Beach by Caducus
7 Jan 2004, 6:29 PM
Something about this screams SONNET! There's plenty of material and plenty of great lines. "...white flag still blows" gives me an image of the backsides of crashing waves from the air.
on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2004, 6:25 PM
A penny is single, solitary, small, one. An excellent image to work with. Stretch the penny over your poem.
Poetry aint easy kiddo. I'd lend you my copy of "Poetry for dummies", except it is part of me, permanently.
I had it sewn under the skin of my left thigh.
Poetry aint easy kiddo. I'd lend you my copy of "Poetry for dummies", except it is part of me, permanently.
I had it sewn under the skin of my left thigh.
I see. Thank you. At least I got some of it correct. Which shows that you are getting closer to your "target".
I believe that wisdom is both dynamic and artistic, however. Unless I have taken your statement incorrectly out of context.
My apologies if I have.
I believe that wisdom is both dynamic and artistic, however. Unless I have taken your statement incorrectly out of context.
My apologies if I have.
on Dance in my Golden Shower by SupremeDreamer
6 Jan 2004, 4:39 PM
Um, no thanks. If it's all the same, i'll stay dirty.
on The burlesque circus clown [revised] by Don-Quixote
6 Jan 2004, 4:37 PM
Sorry bro. Didn't know I'd left ya hangin'. This hits my ears much better though. Who dropped the blue four is beyond me.
on He doesn't love me by tuthaliash
4 Jan 2004, 10:36 AM
Really really good. Based on the fact that Tinty-G is your referrer, and this poem, I'd say you'll be moving on soon.
note: the flash was a camera flash going off as he tries to get out of his chair.