Comments byINTRANSIT, 1201–1220 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Equality by Freethinker1602 26 Jul 2003, 5:48 PM
Go to the bookstore. Buy a copy of "Poetry for dummies". Rub it against your genitalia. It's cheaper than a hooker, and feels better. Trust me. I drive a truck. LOL.!
on Kakistocracy by <{Baba^Yaga}> 26 Jul 2003, 5:33 PM
like it or not, it likes to be not. because it's not like it's not or, it depends on what your definition of the word "is " is. wtf? lol!!!!!
replying on Truckin' by INTRANSIT 26 Jul 2003, 5:27 PM
I thought that wine might help my redux. apparently not. bleh.
replying on Truckin' by INTRANSIT 24 Jul 2003, 6:36 AM
bullracks are aluminum-sided farm animal hauler type thingys.
A trailer used for transporting farm animals. The (drivers?) were singing one line at a time. I dislike my job. It has its moments though. Thanks for the input. home soon. will try to fix.
replying on Middleman by INTRANSIT 22 Jul 2003, 2:45 PM
if you can, what's not right with this? thanks.
on summers children by w~* ATHENA *~w 22 Jul 2003, 5:49 AM
This is good. needs a tweak but I can't quite figure where yet.
on I am the gayest by walrus8 22 Jul 2003, 5:45 AM
You would. Why not Mr Putz?
on Yellow Star by Mr Pig 22 Jul 2003, 5:43 AM
Nice discussion, gentlemen. Wish I had time to read it all. when I get home. Amazing how much impact one day, minute , hour, moment, second, can have.
on rainday by Bill Z Bub 17 Jul 2003, 2:18 PM
More fun than humans should be allowed to have. Miss you guys and gals like the dickens. Who invented that line anyway? Big numbers!
replying on Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT 17 Jul 2003, 2:12 PM
I know. there's no segway there. I'll iron it out when I'm sittin still longer than 3. Christ! Miss you all.
on Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66 15 Jul 2003, 5:44 AM
Hey Z! Glad you're ok! Did you see yourself when you wrote this? You should have. Sorry to hear Africa wasn't quite. But you went! Kudos! Now why this isn't getting better scores is beyond me. Even without the helicopter info, it's all there. Gotta run. Kisses! kisses!
on Strippers by <{Baba^Yaga}> 13 Jul 2003, 11:57 AM
You'll have a little of that from time to time.
Smokin' the hides is always cool!
replying on Death on my arm by INTRANSIT 8 Jul 2003, 12:24 PM
Yaaa DUDE! Go man go!
Nobody does it better. Nebarska. No a/c.
Hotel 'puter. Shouldst I say HOSTILE?
Life sucks without the 'ranker.
on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 20 Jun 2003, 7:41 AM
This one time I'm saying: over the top. too much. repetetively twisted. Honestly, cut it back.

or don't. wash your car with it.
on Detox by OneFingerAnswer 20 Jun 2003, 6:52 AM
Read it aloud to yourself and grind off the speed bumps. They're small but will make it better to read.
on I'll Just Have a Salad by jessicazee 20 Jun 2003, 6:34 AM
Good job Jess. Alittle more serious than others you've written. Say, I've been looking for an open mic spot in Milwaukee, ain't found one yet. you?
on The irony of the dark continent by zzinnia66 19 Jun 2003, 5:17 PM
Anchor down! You've weathered worse!
This new home seeks nature terse.
For thither come, has their nurse,
good will come, from you, disperse.
on Hot Potato by Shardik 19 Jun 2003, 6:06 AM
yer killin' me.