on Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus
2 Oct 2002, 7:02 AM
Goofball. Loved it. If you want, I'll score it. Just say so.
on Norman #86 by Owner of the Sky
2 Oct 2002, 6:59 AM
Good, I like it. It takes a couple of readings, that makes it better.
If you care(9. Hi K!
If you care(9. Hi K!
on Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit
1 Oct 2002, 11:51 AM
I wish my wife spooned me like that! Forgive me if I take this at face value. No,wait... You are the roommate, the dead shape is the bed? I have to understand depth before I can write it. Yes?
replying on always the end to this good night by nentwined
1 Oct 2002, 11:24 AM
Well, when duty calls..... I'm sending you a 55gal drum of 50/40/10 coffee/espresso/nitrous oxide. And some trucker-isms to keep you going. Keep'er between the lines, keep the left door shut, and HAMMER DOWN!
on Haiku for Mum by waltfreakinwhitman
1 Oct 2002, 11:05 AM
Actually, I saw a sweeter side to this. Or maybe I should windex my minds eye.
replying on Fall from Love's Grace by loneshadow29
1 Oct 2002, 11:03 AM
I'd like to give you a hand too. When you're ready, look up my profile and e-mail me.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
1 Oct 2002, 5:57 AM
That is beautiful. A tear has fallen. Scale not big enough.
on always the end to this good night by nentwined
30 Sep 2002, 6:55 PM
Seriously, what's up with the sleep dep. dude. Dudette?
on Asthma by jessicazee
30 Sep 2002, 6:52 PM
This has potential. Focus more on the breathing aspects and less on other junk. No score. work it.
on At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness
30 Sep 2002, 6:41 PM
WOO HOO!!! Another motorhead! I prefer mine with four wheels but since I've moved from the Mile High to WI, I can really dig that cool Harley vibe. Ride on!!!!
on the room's a'spinnin' by nentwined
30 Sep 2002, 5:44 PM
OK, so you're not a kung fu master.
Or a haiku master for that matter.But, it's fun, take a friggin' nap will ya! And thanks for leaving my dumb ass on the site.You knew I'd be back didntcha?
Or a haiku master for that matter.But, it's fun, take a friggin' nap will ya! And thanks for leaving my dumb ass on the site.You knew I'd be back didntcha?
on Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky
29 Sep 2002, 4:17 PM
Poingnant,scary,funny.8
on Paysage Moralise by vulcan
29 Sep 2002, 4:09 PM
Sorry I assumed latin. What a dumb-fuck eh?
on Paysage Moralise by vulcan
29 Sep 2002, 8:43 AM
I really like this.9 Iwish I understood (latin) the title.
on Suicide III by disturbedone182
29 Sep 2002, 8:37 AM
I've seen a suicide. Guy shot himself with a .22 handgun. It's nothing more than sad and selfish. We owe you no apology either. BUT there's a rythm.2
on A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle
28 Sep 2002, 3:56 PM
AAW CHRIST! THATS FUNNY. I remember I was at a 7-11 in Colo and this lady was putting her daughter in the car when the little on held up a pack of Dolly Madisons and yelled DONUTS!
on I'll Always Remember by NobodyGirl9
28 Sep 2002, 3:53 PM
Shorten and add a little beef.Good rythm.8
on The Seagull Reader by SpiffyDoo
28 Sep 2002, 3:43 PM
Of the three, this is the better I think. I think you can improve with future pieces. Welcome.9