Re: happy birthday by rnsbreeze	3-Sep-04/10:25 AM
I enjoyed it, hallmarkey or not.
Re: Lord Byron Gave Mary Her Shelly by horus8	3-Sep-04/10:22 AM
Some parts grabbed me much more than others, but I actually liked this a little, surprised? hell shocked me.
Re: crash&burn by AM I EVIL?	3-Sep-04/10:19 AM
Much better than the other one I read. You should spend some time reading some of the stuff here, might do you good.
Re: FALLING ASLEEP by AM I EVIL?	3-Sep-04/10:16 AM
oooh k, kinda common, try to spice it up.
Re: Love Letter by wilco	3-Sep-04/10:09 AM
Well done wilco, I really enjoyed reading this one!
Re: How many? by rnsbreeze	1-Sep-04/6:54 AM
An inescapable truth. (Unless you believe in incarnation, then it's still inescapable, you just don't know it.)
Re: Buzzards by rnsbreeze	1-Sep-04/6:51 AM
Now that's what I call hitting the perverbial nail on the head!
Re: Lachrymose by affei09	28-Aug-04/1:14 PM
don't know what to think for sure. the style is new to me, and it seems a bit forced in places. Overall a good pome tho'
Re: A Stitch In Time by Dovina	24-Aug-04/7:59 PM
So true. Well done.
Re: Absolution by andrewjthomas	23-Aug-04/9:21 PM
It would seem he found his strength in Catholicism. But it is better to be a true Catholic, than to pretend to be.
Re: Of Gifts by thepinkbunnyofdoom	23-Aug-04/9:17 PM
now this, I like.
Re: Of Life by thepinkbunnyofdoom	23-Aug-04/9:14 PM
Forgetfulness is bliss. By the way <3?
Re: a comment on Guilt Trip by thepinkbunnyofdoom	23-Aug-04/9:12 PM
And still you will notice that I have a higher average. Hmmm, Top heavy? where have all your top 10 poems been?
Re: The 80's by wilco	19-Aug-04/8:35 AM
I think I'm real close to what I wanted to be back then, except for the money of course.
Re: a comment on The Finger of my Mind by sliver	17-Aug-04/9:42 AM
Thanks Dan. I like to think this is one of my better ones.
Re: Vows by QuirkyWonder	17-Aug-04/7:25 AM
Enjoyable, I can allmost see you behind those walls.
Re: Trust by QuirkyWonder	16-Aug-04/10:51 PM
Vote on mine I'll vote on yours!
Re: Sequel by MacFrantic	16-Aug-04/10:30 PM
Keep writing about writing, Have fat women sing, If the waiters must come Have them bring more bling bling
Re: I Can't Move On by Sirens_Voice	16-Aug-04/10:27 PM
Seems to stop. abruptly. once too many, times. rewrite.
Re: Guilt Trip by thepinkbunnyofdoom	16-Aug-04/10:25 PM
Ya know, I'd like to give this a zero, not because I don't like it, but for the 0's you've given me .. on better things. still, I think the o's are for others to come, but not from me.