on What you know by INTRANSIT
27 Aug 2003, 10:14 AM
you have quite an original writing style. I always enjoy the read. sad and lonely, especially like the last few lines.
on It's about truckin' by INTRANSIT
27 Aug 2003, 10:37 AM
So many, create and arrange thier poems, it's what they think...not feel. I love that you write your life, your existence.
how YOU portray the world...not how you are expected to. Poetry is not just about guidelines, too often feeling is lost in the pursuit of perfection. I also believe that your job is often overlooked as the noble position that it is. This is your reality, you demand respect....you have mine.
how YOU portray the world...not how you are expected to. Poetry is not just about guidelines, too often feeling is lost in the pursuit of perfection. I also believe that your job is often overlooked as the noble position that it is. This is your reality, you demand respect....you have mine.
on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
26 Apr 2003, 2:41 PM
I've read alot of your work, but I think this is quite ingenious. Hats off, my friend!
on For my wife by INTRANSIT
17 Feb 2003, 9:13 PM
Beautiful. Sounds like your "both" in love.
on I don't like fish by INTRANSIT
23 Nov 2003, 7:09 AM
I enjoyed this. Especially the "I felt worse" I like the way you think!!
on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT
28 Jan 2004, 4:09 PM
I concur. Well put, Goed.
on some deleted poem
14 Jun 2004, 6:56 AM
Superb! Clearly a very succesful revision.
on some deleted poem
13 Jun 2004, 4:18 PM
Great visual. I really admire your writing style.
on Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT
1 Jun 2004, 4:44 PM
Excellent!
on Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT
2 Jun 2004, 6:44 AM
Excellent!
on Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT
26 Apr 2005, 8:01 PM
And yours is better...how? Your brilliant recreation is NOT a Villanelle, so comparing the two proves quite difficult!
on In praise of racism by INTRANSIT
23 Jan 2006, 2:32 PM
I like this one.
Well done, you!!!