on Morning Conversation by lexicon
10 Jan 2003, 6:53 PM
i like it 8
on my journey--or the beginning of... by blurryphotograph
9 Jan 2003, 1:47 PM
i really liked this peice
why dont u have ne thing else posted?
8
why dont u have ne thing else posted?
8
on corners by rockinindividual
4 Jan 2003, 8:19 PM
love it 10
on She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David
7 Dec 2002, 5:48 PM
if this chicks real she is so cool /9
Sorry for confuseing you!
The first 3 lines represent black magic an evil act
The last 3 what its doing
It just sort of states how the world isn???t as black and white as society makes it out to be
And how little we all actually know about what???s really going on
The reason behind and action should justify it
Not the action it???s self
The title should be changed
The first 3 lines represent black magic an evil act
The last 3 what its doing
It just sort of states how the world isn???t as black and white as society makes it out to be
And how little we all actually know about what???s really going on
The reason behind and action should justify it
Not the action it???s self
The title should be changed
on I Wish by liljsmith87
30 Nov 2002, 7:01 PM
cute
on Wanting by Sugarbbybuttrfly
30 Nov 2002, 4:37 PM
its good but i really dont like the line "she used to think that love was from above" it throws the whole thing off for me. good poem tho i really like the begining 7
on Flamin Monkey's by Blade
30 Nov 2002, 4:25 PM
nice 7
on Lines by OneFingerAnswer
25 Nov 2002, 6:40 PM
cute
on Thornwood (Splinters) by OneFingerAnswer
25 Nov 2002, 6:38 PM
i like it 7
on I will love you forever by savannah
23 Nov 2002, 11:30 AM
its sweet
sounds like a card
7
sounds like a card
7
on Mind of War by t_t_redhot
26 Oct 2002, 7:40 PM
good imagery
on Thank You Mom by savannah
26 Oct 2002, 7:38 PM
i like the line that deepens every year :)
on Free to Not Know Me by jsab78
26 Oct 2002, 7:36 PM
its different 8
on A Well Worth Wait by savannah
26 Oct 2002, 7:34 PM
its cute .7
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
26 Oct 2002, 7:32 PM
cool