on For my wife by INTRANSIT
28 Dec 2020, 5:18 PM
dove's wing needs an apostrophe
on The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT
28 Dec 2020, 5:12 PM
(gurney)
on Poem on a face by INTRANSIT
28 Dec 2020, 5:03 PM
He WAS caged for treason.
on Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT
28 Dec 2020, 5:00 PM
Cute! Especially the image of the snake classroom at the end!
on submission to decay by FreeFormFixation
28 Dec 2020, 3:08 PM
like the idea and this has some very good lines.
on B.F. by skaskowski
28 Dec 2020, 2:56 PM
Love the last stanza!
on exploration of entirety by skaskowski
28 Dec 2020, 2:47 PM
some good imagery
on the absent-minded walk on the proverbial mountainside of nothingness + my mother's old tampons by skaskowski
28 Dec 2020, 2:42 PM
Loved the rhythm! You maintained it beautifully!
on Sleeping Beauty by fevriere
28 Dec 2020, 2:16 PM
Enjoyed this!
on Forever Lasting by ChefKSP
28 Dec 2020, 2:16 PM
Taking the first word from every stanza (an acrostic of sorts):
I will always feel complete while you're in my life.
I will always feel complete while you're in my life.
on Captian, Doctor..Father by celticskatermatt1
28 Dec 2020, 2:10 PM
Captain--not captian...
on The Symbol by Dovina
28 Dec 2020, 2:07 PM
Well done!
on unsung love by khuscen
28 Dec 2020, 2:05 PM
(some die, not dies)
on Star Studded Supermarket by [mojo]
28 Dec 2020, 1:52 PM
Imaginative, humorous!
on A Permanent Fixture by wilco
27 Dec 2020, 4:56 PM
(its dying- no apostrophe in this case)
on A Permanent Fixture by wilco
27 Dec 2020, 4:56 PM
(its dying- no apostrophe in this case)
I would remove the comma between lighthouse and clutching- no comma needed. Beautiful poem. Really well done.