poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Dan garcia-Black (301-320) and replies

Comments byDan garcia-Black, 301–320 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Grind by INTRANSIT 25 Nov 2003, 11:33 AM
Real.
on Lines and half lines by aliena 25 Nov 2003, 11:30 AM
Been there. You make a great stone soup.
on The makings of a killer by <{Baba^Yaga}> 17 Aug 2003, 5:58 PM
Jerimi sounds like a great last date. Too bad I'm gender conscious. If I were not I'm sure I would be unconscious the morning after and this scientific method of thinking would be validated by my corpse. Does Jerimi work for the CIA, or worse, is he a law professor? Great thought process good follow through. 9(at least).
on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 14 Aug 2003, 10:38 PM
Ohhhh Yeah! That's what I'm talkin' bout. Rather, what you're talking about that resonates superbly. Better than a good idea. It's a good idea well presented. 10
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 7 Aug 2003, 12:08 AM
Jeeeeeeezus, help me. I liked it. I have an good excuse though. I've had a stroke recently.
on smile by nolan 7 Aug 2003, 12:03 AM
Good one. I felt just like that once-- a couple of times.
on Border Crashing by JoyLuck 31 Jul 2003, 9:19 AM
Same thing happened to me when I was 18 'cept my VW wouldn't go faster than 55 downhill with a tailwind.
on Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy 27 Jul 2003, 11:49 AM
The Orkin man's Dna will long be gone before "Mamaroach" finishes her crouton.
Don't he know what spraying poisen can do
To him, to us, to me and you?
Silly contract killers.

Dan garcia-Black "Son of Roachmama"
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 20 Mar 2003, 7:09 PM
Thoughtfully sculpted. This may not be much of a compliment, but I believe it's better than any of mine.

on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub 14 Mar 2003, 8:30 AM
Good execution of the subject.
on Monday by betty swallox 11 Nov 2002, 10:27 AM
I think I work there, too.
on Horse Burgers by flanners 11 Nov 2002, 10:25 AM
Unclear to me if this is a description of your interaction with your muse (Mist & misery). Is this about your writing process?
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9 Nov 2002, 12:30 AM
Good funny truth.
on The heart of self destruction by Roisin 9 Nov 2002, 12:16 AM
Fine imagery. What you mean to say is understood without the (by you).
Been on both sides of this one. Painful but real.
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7 Nov 2002, 8:40 AM
Limericks usually make me laugh.
I did. But I felt very, very guilty afterwards. It has also made me wary of drinking from a glarse. I will be drinking from the toilet bowl with a straw from now on.
on Longing by deadstar 7 Nov 2002, 8:26 AM
I see the rhyme scheme but I think it might be better said without rhyme and show greater feeling said without the constaints. I like the positive last stanza after the angst of the first two.
on My Friend? by Blade 6 Nov 2002, 11:01 PM
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on Blade by Blade 6 Nov 2002, 10:57 PM
If blade is a knife object the poem works for me but if blade is a is a person then it is harder to swallow.