poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Ranger (1181-1200)

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on The Grapes of Wrath by ==Doylum 5 Feb 2003, 12:25 PM
Not as good as Harry Potter but still worthy of a nine! Keep it up!
on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 31 Jan 2003, 1:02 PM
Exactly.
on The Marble Jar & the new boy, Primrose Avenue, Yesteryear. by ==Doylum 5 Feb 2003, 12:19 PM
Cool, ish, kind of, 9
on some deleted poem 5 Feb 2003, 12:26 PM
Yep, I like it.
on As I lay by Katie 31 Jan 2003, 12:42 PM
In my opinion this is too much just a letter. Split the lines a bit. I agree with brokenwing, this does have potential, but I don't think that this is fully complete. Keep at it.
on The Merry Man by Teen14 1 Feb 2003, 9:24 AM
Nice poem!
on Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus 1 Feb 2003, 9:26 AM
Wowee wow! Fun fun fun!
Is it only a third of Americans that believe that?
on Spring Delight by Teen14 1 Feb 2003, 9:28 AM
Lovely. Spring rolls as well (I'm shamelessly self-promoting).
on Run Forest! Run... by Bachus 1 Feb 2003, 9:29 AM
This is by far your best work!!!
on Elegy by Quarton 31 Jan 2003, 12:45 PM
Yep, I like it-it's a lyric, not a free verse as far as I can see. Good stuff.

If you read my latest attempt you'll see that Icarus doesn't need his wings, he's got a plane.
on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 31 Jan 2003, 12:47 PM
Bold, straight to the point although I still don't know what the nightmare is.
on All I Feel by brokenwing 31 Jan 2003, 12:52 PM
'Fluorescent'

Like the poem, it is one of your best.
on Despair by Caducus 31 Jan 2003, 12:56 PM
Caducus, perhaps you should split it up so that the 'forgive me's are in seperate stanzas from the rest? It might add a little to the structure.
on Lovers Game by scitz 31 Jan 2003, 12:58 PM
Pretty good. sado-masochism I believe has a wossname, hyphon type thing in between.
on some deleted poem 31 Jan 2003, 1:01 PM
I really like the poem. Third line should start "There's", other than that it's great!
on Small Town Tavern by NinjaPoet 30 Jan 2003, 11:21 AM
Wonderful ending. 'bsolutely wonderful.
on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum 5 Feb 2003, 12:23 PM
I've not laughed this much for ages. You may have a nine, no wait, this is the best parody yet and it's not a haiku, here's a laughter filled ten!
on Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones 5 Feb 2003, 12:17 PM
Whoaaaa, weird at first...I think in my confusion I'll give an 8
on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos 5 Feb 2003, 12:12 PM
Fun
on Slow motion by INTRANSIT 1 Feb 2003, 11:08 PM
Has a lot of potential, mr intransit. Keep going, though, I agree with the above comment, it does need a bit more.