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16-Dec-02/4:17 AM |
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Where did this one come from?????
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16-Dec-02/4:18 AM |
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| Re: A Sonnet For Santa Claus, Who Hates Jesus, But Likes When You Buy Things by snacktime |
11-Dec-02/2:09 AM |
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Not bad, although I was expecting something more humourous from the title...
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| Re: The Stifling Moment by vulcan |
17-Dec-02/1:24 AM |
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Holy shit this is strange. I need to read it a couple more times before I decide whether I like it or not. Good words, though. I'll give it an 8 for now, just because of the fifth line-'moon-haunted woods'-brilliant!
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| Re: Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum |
17-Dec-02/1:34 AM |
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Wow, you've got a thing about these blue butterflies, haven't you?
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
16-Dec-02/4:48 AM |
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Oh, and 'gonareha' is an STD-not something you'd want to get everyday (although if you got it everyday, you'd have to be damn busy!)
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16-Dec-02/4:40 AM |
Yeah...I really like this-"Your lover's smile, I guess/Or ten million pounds gaining interest"
Very good.
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| Re: A Part Of Me Dies by Caducus |
16-Dec-02/4:43 AM |
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I really like your style, but could you write something a bit more, well, happy?
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| Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn |
13-Dec-02/4:23 AM |
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So, horus8 and poetandknowit, care to explain the problems with this? Constructive criticism is part of what this site's about.
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| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
13-Dec-02/4:28 AM |
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| Re: West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones |
13-Dec-02/4:30 AM |
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| Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Dec-02/1:59 AM |
It's spelled: 'Acquired Immuno-Deficiency Syndrome'. Sorry.
A reasonably funny set of poems, D.A., but it was a bit too long, therefore it can't have a ten, but it was too funny to warrant a zero. Let's see if we can find a value inbetween?
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| Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Dec-02/2:00 AM |
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Oh, and the title is good.
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11-Dec-02/2:02 AM |
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11-Dec-02/2:18 AM |
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Nice to see a work of art appreciated by the punters. Okay, enough about Ozric Tentacles' new album, this poem is wonderfully shite. Dark Angel, I don't know if you realise, but the gun laws in your country have resulted in the deaths of hundreds of innocent schoolkids. Or are you an Englishman in disguise?
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| Re: Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum |
17-Dec-02/1:19 AM |
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And there was me thinking this was all about acid.
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
16-Dec-02/4:46 AM |
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