on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 4:17 AM
Where did this one come from?????
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 4:18 AM
Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 4:16 AM
See comment for Pain 5
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 4:16 AM
Hnur, hnur, hnur
on A Sonnet For Santa Claus, Who Hates Jesus, But Likes When You Buy Things by snacktime
11 Dec 2002, 2:09 AM
Not bad, although I was expecting something more humourous from the title...
on The Stifling Moment by vulcan
17 Dec 2002, 1:24 AM
Holy shit this is strange. I need to read it a couple more times before I decide whether I like it or not. Good words, though. I'll give it an 8 for now, just because of the fifth line-'moon-haunted woods'-brilliant!
on Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum
17 Dec 2002, 1:34 AM
Wow, you've got a thing about these blue butterflies, haven't you?
on My Friend? by Blade
16 Dec 2002, 4:48 AM
Oh, and 'gonareha' is an STD-not something you'd want to get everyday (although if you got it everyday, you'd have to be damn busy!)
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 4:40 AM
Yeah...I really like this-"Your lover's smile, I guess/Or ten million pounds gaining interest"
Very good.
Very good.
on A Part Of Me Dies by Caducus
16 Dec 2002, 4:43 AM
I really like your style, but could you write something a bit more, well, happy?
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
13 Dec 2002, 4:28 AM
Fair doos
on West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones
13 Dec 2002, 4:30 AM
Hee hee hee
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Dec 2002, 1:59 AM
It's spelled: 'Acquired Immuno-Deficiency Syndrome'. Sorry.
A reasonably funny set of poems, D.A., but it was a bit too long, therefore it can't have a ten, but it was too funny to warrant a zero. Let's see if we can find a value inbetween?
A reasonably funny set of poems, D.A., but it was a bit too long, therefore it can't have a ten, but it was too funny to warrant a zero. Let's see if we can find a value inbetween?
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Dec 2002, 2:00 AM
Oh, and the title is good.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 2:02 AM
O-kayyyy
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 2:18 AM
Nice to see a work of art appreciated by the punters. Okay, enough about Ozric Tentacles' new album, this poem is wonderfully shite. Dark Angel, I don't know if you realise, but the gun laws in your country have resulted in the deaths of hundreds of innocent schoolkids. Or are you an Englishman in disguise?
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 4:18 AM
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on Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum
17 Dec 2002, 1:19 AM
And there was me thinking this was all about acid.
on My Friend? by Blade
16 Dec 2002, 4:46 AM
HAA HAA HAA! Ah, mirth.