| Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone |
21-Apr-05/1:38 AM |
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| Re: a comment on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ |
21-Apr-05/1:33 AM |
Mostly the "-ation" so often (which I think someone's already commented on).
I also appreciated the fact that you had the presence of mind to let people know this is a 'pimple', yet so many others slate it as though you'd been trying to write Byron. That made me chuckle.
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| Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
19-Apr-05/2:23 PM |
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Possibly the most convincing incentive for me to attend Church and become anorexic. In that order. If the Lord is not proud of you, I would be most terribly surprised. God bless.
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| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
19-Apr-05/2:13 PM |
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You, sir, are the reason I couldn't keep my as yet unbrowned hands from this site.
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| Re: ab*defg by Goad |
19-Apr-05/1:27 PM |
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ye-es...you can, of course, remove keys from the keyboard.
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| Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote |
19-Apr-05/1:26 PM |
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Ever considered Polyfilla?
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| Re: Five on Buddha against Bruce Lee by Luzr |
19-Apr-05/1:21 PM |
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| Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ |
19-Apr-05/1:14 PM |
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Oddly enough the big votes here do seem to go with the big words rather than the big attitudes. I liked being shouted at although a couple of the rhymes weren't my cup of tea (although I'm in no position to criticise other peoples' rhymes), 8 from me.
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| Re: The Incubation by oneglove |
17-Apr-05/1:10 PM |
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| Re: the Dreamer by darylchew |
17-Apr-05/1:08 PM |
I guarantee people on this highly-accommodating site will slate this. Make it humorous and you might convert them. Perhaps after the 'will he ever act' you could put something like 'will he remember to breathe?' or maybe 'will he contract AIDS?' (although the answer to that seems quite obvious to me).
It's a decent start, and as someone wise on here said to me, not necessarily in these exact words, be unto yourself true. If you like your poetry that's the most important thing - unless of course you harbour dreams of getting them published. Then you have to pander to the masses. 7
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| Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
17-Apr-05/1:03 PM |
I've often been mildly curious as to what NASDAQ means, but not nearly enough so that I bothered to find out. Ah, the power of acronyms.
Also, I feel a need to express my rage at the uselessness of this disk, upon whose digital memory I inscribed my latest masterpieces, and whose incompatibility with my computer was almost predictible enough to be amusing. Almost.
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| Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey |
17-Apr-05/12:59 PM |
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Preach my pain also, oh how I long for those youthful days too. I appreciate this. 9
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| Re: The Layer of Black by emilyowey |
17-Apr-05/12:55 PM |
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As a student I feel obliged to be wracked with guilt at not being black, impoverished or in prison (or any combination thereof)
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| Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
17-Apr-05/12:53 PM |
Lovely, I particularly liked the fountain and the exchange of stone to grass.
The Stock Exchange on weed...that would be something worth seeing
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| Re: a comment on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub |
26-May-03/11:35 AM |
You are too critical to yourself, most of your poems are miles better than anything that I can manage-not that that's saying anything, but still.
Hey Bill, I like the content but it didn't seem right reading with all the breaks-it's just my opinion but I think it needs to be more together...other than, it rocks!
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| Re: Recipe for Regaining Youth by Blade |
18-May-03/11:54 AM |
This has currently only got one comment-mine-and I really can't see that changing. However I would urge everybody who read it to vote it a zero; who knows we might just get this one an average of 0.00
Let me lead the way.
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| Re: a comment on The consistency of frailty by INTRANSIT |
18-May-03/11:51 AM |
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I believe that the true point is just where the pen meets the paper, but I could be wrong.
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| Re: My Nieghborhood(2) by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
18-May-03/11:49 AM |
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Yeah I suppose it does need editing, but I actually really like the way this one's going! 7
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| Re: Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig |
18-May-03/11:42 AM |
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It does seem a bit too loose in places, and 'I was very angry with God' doesn't really do credit to your ability. Even so it's an enjoyable read, and nice to see people trying something a bit more traditional/ classical (and succeeding!) 9
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| Re: Not quite myselfs. by cleverdevice |
18-May-03/11:38 AM |
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