| Re: John Denver's hang-glider by horus8 |
16-May-03/8:02 AM |
Glorious.
AT LAST THE COLLEGE HAS UNBLOCKED THE RANKER!!!
I am now in a generous mood, have a ten on the house.
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| Re: a comment on Isolate by Beseech |
16-May-03/8:00 AM |
Golden Que Tip.
I got one too, see!
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| Re: Ode To Mushroomhead by Beseech |
16-May-03/7:58 AM |
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| Re: Jokie Smurf by Bachus |
16-May-03/7:52 AM |
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Marvellous as always Mr. B.
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
8-May-03/1:55 PM |
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Even though the last one isn't really a limerick...
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| Re: AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
8-May-03/1:54 PM |
Yikes! Funny, very funny most certainly.
I'd like to see "even gets" changed around, it sounds better. 8
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| Re: Blues by Christof |
8-May-03/1:51 PM |
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Hey Christof it's nice to see you're back, submit something soon!
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| Re: Spam by Blade |
8-May-03/1:41 PM |
Damn I enjoyed that.
For once I can safely give this a 0 without even a slight feeling of remorse. Here. See?
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| Re: a comment on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger |
7-May-03/12:37 PM |
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I will have a think about that and see what I can come up with for the fairies. Thanks for the advice, I like the way this one's progressing.
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| Re: a comment on Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8 |
7-May-03/12:18 PM |
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That is, based on the assumption that 'anonymosity' is in reality a word.
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| Re: Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8 |
7-May-03/12:17 PM |
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Not deserving a blue 1, I wish people would say why they give these low marks but hey that's just me being a whiny Brit. Great poem, I wanted to give it an 8 but instead it shall have a nine to try to balance the anonymosity.
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| Re: You wash up, I forget. by Bachus |
7-May-03/12:12 PM |
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Yep, as with your last few I enjoyed this one a great deal. Really well done. 8
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| Re: a comment on Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger |
4-May-03/9:22 AM |
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| Re: he was the one i had written about before i met him 2 by rockinindividual |
2-May-03/1:21 PM |
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| Re: kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual |
2-May-03/1:19 PM |
Nice, opener is wicked. What more can I say? 9
I would love for you to let me know what you think of my latest effort, the fairytale one.
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| Re: Remember by Luv2write |
2-May-03/1:14 PM |
A sweetly written piece. I know you must love to write but submitting 3 or 4 at a time won't get you that far. Contain your poetry and submit it in smaller, bitesize chunks and let us savour each morsel. Right I'm talking bollocks now, I'll shut up. Don't cheer.
Nice song anyway.
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| Re: Sir John Betjeman is dead Nicholas. by Bachus |
2-May-03/1:05 PM |
*sniff* Beautiful...so true to life. Fucking English cunts. Can't stand them.
Heh heh heh...made me laugh mucho, I see you have an 8 and a 10 so let the average roll. 9
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| Re: a comment on Equation by Miggy |
2-May-03/12:51 PM |
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Fair enough. I like these lyrics, they're showing potential.
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| Re: a comment on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8 |
2-May-03/12:46 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig |
29-Apr-03/10:45 AM |
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