| Re: a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
21-Jan-03/1:22 AM |
Well now, food for thought indeed! First and foremost, this was written as a lyric because that's what I am best at (although I've just written a free verse which I will submit soon for you lot to read). That is why I a) rhyme and b) use 'fillers'. I personally prefer to have a set rhythm and therefore I attempt to fill it to the best degree possible don't know if that makes any sense, but hey). I agree that in some cases the information is unnecessary, however it tends to be that I'm writing this online and think hmm, that doesn't fit-what can I put in? That is part of the reason why it's not wholly useful.
Anyway, thanks for your help-hope to hear from you a bit later-and I'll submit this other one that I'd like you to read.
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| Re: a comment on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
20-Jan-03/8:12 AM |
81% vilanelle! Love it!
"Reception bellington", wonderful...here have a nine, this rocks!
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| Re: Mooseknuckle MacFoofingtons by Bachus |
20-Jan-03/4:10 AM |
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That's just nitpicking. I love this.
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| Re: Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim |
17-Jan-03/12:01 PM |
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| Re: In Winter by Bobjim |
17-Jan-03/11:50 AM |
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Nice of you to tell us you plagerized it, though. That clears that up.
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| Re: In Winter by Bobjim |
17-Jan-03/11:49 AM |
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| Re: Who Flamed Roger Rabbit? by poemwanker |
17-Jan-03/11:48 AM |
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| Re: beat myself with a stick by sir_heff |
17-Jan-03/10:55 AM |
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| Re: Sex by MuDvAyNe |
17-Jan-03/10:53 AM |
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Surely virtual sex isn't as good as the real thing now, is it? Try masturbation.
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| Re: dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY |
17-Jan-03/5:01 AM |
Possibly I should say it again?
No.
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| Re: dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY |
17-Jan-03/5:01 AM |
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| Re: Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 |
17-Jan-03/4:55 AM |
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This is magnificent, sir. Many congratulations to you! I will hereby grant you a nine and stop this strangely pretentious speech of mine etc. etc.
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| Re: a comment on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub |
16-Jan-03/8:15 AM |
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Beg pardon, I meant your poetry. Stupid keyboard.
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| Re: the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub |
16-Jan-03/8:14 AM |
Ah, ya bastard. You sit down, braindead and write very fast and this comes out. I've spent fucking weeks on a poem and it's still bollocks. Grr.
10. Much respect for you poetry.
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| Re: All you can eat by flatliner |
16-Jan-03/8:12 AM |
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| Re: Women Fight Dirty by scitz |
16-Jan-03/8:00 AM |
Well it looks like you deserved this one!
Last line cracked me up. 8
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| Re: a comment on distance by Crakyamuni |
16-Jan-03/7:58 AM |
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Don't mean to sound bullish or anything-it's just that the old 'dance of death' etc doesn't fit in with this.
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| Re: distance by Crakyamuni |
16-Jan-03/7:58 AM |
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Take out line three and I will give this an 8-it's nice.
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| Re: Old Man by keatsImnot |
16-Jan-03/7:44 AM |
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I met an old guy in France who was a soldier many years before. He spoke better English than most Englishmen.
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| Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
16-Jan-03/7:38 AM |
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Argh, do I laugh hysterically and vote you a ten or do I think "racist American" and vote zero? I dunno, I think I'll go for "Do bugger all". Yes, that works.
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