| Re: Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum |
17-Dec-02/1:49 AM |
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No, hang on, ignore the first question, I get you now. But still, why are they blue?
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| Re: Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum |
17-Dec-02/1:47 AM |
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So how does that work? Where did they come from? And most importantly, why are they blue?
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
17-Dec-02/1:44 AM |
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Cheers! Why are people repeatedly voting above zero? If we're not careful, this might get lifted off the bottom! What a crime! This place is rightfully Blade's.
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| Re: Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum |
17-Dec-02/1:36 AM |
Like the poem though.
Hey, you should hear my group (the Psychedelic Butterflies) sometime. Oh, hang on, that means we actually have to record something.
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| Re: Music That Cannot Exist (Next Verse) by Fetylum |
17-Dec-02/1:34 AM |
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Wow, you've got a thing about these blue butterflies, haven't you?
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| Re: The Stifling Moment by vulcan |
17-Dec-02/1:24 AM |
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Holy shit this is strange. I need to read it a couple more times before I decide whether I like it or not. Good words, though. I'll give it an 8 for now, just because of the fifth line-'moon-haunted woods'-brilliant!
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| Re: Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum |
17-Dec-02/1:19 AM |
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And there was me thinking this was all about acid.
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| Re: a comment on Am I Still Here? by Ranger |
17-Dec-02/1:11 AM |
Wow, thanks! I was considering giving this poem a subtitle-"The Importance of Sleep", but I was too tired.
Oh, and how is it possible for my tonsils to grow back unevenly? It sounds mighty amusing!
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
16-Dec-02/4:48 AM |
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Oh, and 'gonareha' is an STD-not something you'd want to get everyday (although if you got it everyday, you'd have to be damn busy!)
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
16-Dec-02/4:46 AM |
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| Re: A Part Of Me Dies by Caducus |
16-Dec-02/4:43 AM |
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I really like your style, but could you write something a bit more, well, happy?
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| Re: West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones |
13-Dec-02/4:30 AM |
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| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
13-Dec-02/4:28 AM |
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| Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn |
13-Dec-02/4:23 AM |
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So, horus8 and poetandknowit, care to explain the problems with this? Constructive criticism is part of what this site's about.
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| Re: a comment on The North Wind by Ranger |
13-Dec-02/4:17 AM |
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| Re: A Sonnet For Santa Claus, Who Hates Jesus, But Likes When You Buy Things by snacktime |
11-Dec-02/2:09 AM |
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Not bad, although I was expecting something more humourous from the title...
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| Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Dec-02/2:00 AM |
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Oh, and the title is good.
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| Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Dec-02/1:59 AM |
It's spelled: 'Acquired Immuno-Deficiency Syndrome'. Sorry.
A reasonably funny set of poems, D.A., but it was a bit too long, therefore it can't have a ten, but it was too funny to warrant a zero. Let's see if we can find a value inbetween?
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| Re: a comment on The North Wind by Ranger |
11-Dec-02/1:47 AM |
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Cheers! By the way, who are you? I don't mean to sound rude, but I know far too many people on this site!
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| Re: Friend by MysticalRaven88 |
2-Dec-02/4:27 AM |
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Who was P&K referring to when he told whoever it was to turn off the BBC? Was it me or Red Neck. It was probably me. Does this mean we're not allowed opinions? Please educate me in America's purposes in their actions in the Middle East. I really need to know just why I sound like a dork.
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