on Hurt by Cougarchic
1 May 2004, 10:29 AM
what do you mean by 'real'.
on Do You Rue Barbed Pi? by MacFrantic
1 May 2004, 10:25 AM
Interesting enough. The cliches are best when they fit together though.
Best bits - She's driving me over the edge/ stuck in the trunk'
and 'dawns on me/ sun is rising'
Best bits - She's driving me over the edge/ stuck in the trunk'
and 'dawns on me/ sun is rising'
on There Is No Such Thing As A Poem by Aetius
30 Apr 2004, 1:31 PM
'There are truths bled out through ink-stained hands;' I think you are probably thinking about philosophers, poetes just write pretty words.
replying on saltwater bath by J.B. Manning
29 Apr 2004, 3:50 AM
meta-thought?
on Pardon my lines by Bobjim
28 Apr 2004, 11:11 AM
You are right. What I meant to say was that asking mona lisa for head under the pseudonym Dirk Diggler was ungentlemanly.
Don't do it again.
Don't do it again.
replying on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer
28 Apr 2004, 7:56 AM
Probably DeQuincey who wrote confessions of an opium eater.
replying on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer
27 Apr 2004, 11:14 PM
To call women whores is quite misogynistic. Strippers are still women. Do you call men stripper whores.
Also this thing you have with drugs. How about more wit.
'the railman gave me two cures/ said step right in/ one was texas medicine/ the other railroad gin/ like a fool I mixed them/ it scrambled up my mind/ now people just seem uglier and/ I have no sense of time' Bob Dylan - Stuck inside of mobile.
One of my favourites.
Also this thing you have with drugs. How about more wit.
'the railman gave me two cures/ said step right in/ one was texas medicine/ the other railroad gin/ like a fool I mixed them/ it scrambled up my mind/ now people just seem uglier and/ I have no sense of time' Bob Dylan - Stuck inside of mobile.
One of my favourites.
replying on Love, Fair by MacFrantic
27 Apr 2004, 12:21 PM
A nude personifying apprehension. On a plinth.
on Bare Feet, Bear Feet, a Bare Feat, and a Bear Feat by Enkidu
27 Apr 2004, 10:56 AM
Miss out has from the first line, it is just confusing.
on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer
27 Apr 2004, 10:22 AM
'oblivion becomes me' is terrible.
Some decent parts I think. The urge to write bit, the fades into subtelty, the spastic idiocy.
Don't like the misogynism, and you know the response talking about pot gets you.
Some decent parts I think. The urge to write bit, the fades into subtelty, the spastic idiocy.
Don't like the misogynism, and you know the response talking about pot gets you.
replying on Love, Fair by MacFrantic
27 Apr 2004, 7:53 AM
where is this image you speak of?
on Lose That Too ! by recherche
27 Apr 2004, 7:52 AM
There is a problem with the valley daffodils and marigolds.
It sounds as though you have just strung a few poeticisms together and hoped it makes sense.
Have you ever seen marigolds on a valley. Really?
It sounds as though you have just strung a few poeticisms together and hoped it makes sense.
Have you ever seen marigolds on a valley. Really?
replying on Love, Fair by MacFrantic
27 Apr 2004, 6:49 AM
I believe it is important to learn what words and phrases mean before using them. Discuss.
on do androids dream? by nentwined
22 Apr 2004, 6:48 AM
Is didacticism still bad? What is poetry that is not didactic, impartial? Is poetry not creeping didacticism?
I'll give you an -8-, I would give you more if this was decentthoughtranker.com
I'll give you an -8-, I would give you more if this was decentthoughtranker.com
replying on Quintus: Lesson 1 by richa
22 Apr 2004, 6:37 AM
thanks,
replying on Ignorance by JohnnyRocker
22 Apr 2004, 6:12 AM
wait a minute, to recite this you must likely have been part of the dialogue.