poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bill Z Bub (481-500) and replies

Comments byBill Z Bub, 481–500 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on before I forget by moonUnit 18 Dec 2002, 8:47 PM
quite good.
quite quite good.
I feel all warm and snuggly.
on no cure by New Life Drug 18 Dec 2002, 7:05 PM
It went on one stanza too long. And the line "Its a gast of inpossible waves". "inpossible"? thats immcorrect. And what is gast? Otherwise, I love it. (Its very applicable to a current situation I'm in. For that... 99999999999999999999
on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 18 Dec 2002, 6:21 PM
Good revision
on A writers creed by wordsy 17 Dec 2002, 4:53 PM
love the first stanza.
the rest? not so much.
Gods, I love the idea of parallel universes...
on Cecelia by Nicholas Monson 16 Dec 2002, 4:52 PM
you made me smile.
thanks.
on Am I Still Here? by Ranger 16 Dec 2002, 4:01 PM
great!

and remember, the owls are not what they seem!
replying on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 15 Dec 2002, 10:08 PM
thanks. maybe its because I'm psuedo-american (ie Canadian) that I have no need to throw in lines about flags or eagles. Yet here in southern ontario, I am much closer to new york than someone in, say, california.

the thing i remember most now is the dust that choked the great canyons of the city blocks. the wailing, the whiteness, and me half dressed, scratching rats nest hair, clutching the tv remote without strength left.
replying on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 15 Dec 2002, 10:03 PM
no, you are correct. crap. I always think of September as the Fall. Our Canadian summer's don't last too long.

on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT 15 Dec 2002, 6:31 PM
beige and teal? you lost me.
on Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart 14 Dec 2002, 8:23 PM
a most annoying reading experience
my fingers hurt from so much scrolling

pah
bug
shvu
madif
on The Fucking Fives by <{Baba^Yaga}> 14 Dec 2002, 8:11 PM
HA! Grrrreat, joost grrrreat!
on Unjust by angel_uy 14 Dec 2002, 8:07 PM
uh huh.
on First Site by angel_uy 14 Dec 2002, 8:06 PM
Blaaaaaargh!
replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 14 Dec 2002, 8:23 AM
the moon! wish i could have seen that, but i'm a child of the 70's in the year of the rat.
replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 13 Dec 2002, 7:33 PM
is it so wrong to make funny words for the tv generation,

why is okay to make a reference to a book
but not a tv show?
because you and your friends have read the book?

Its all just beautiful stories


oh well
replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 12 Dec 2002, 11:16 AM
You know this isn't really about sex with aliens, right?
replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 12 Dec 2002, 10:22 AM
Hangar 18 is located in Area 51.
replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 11 Dec 2002, 10:43 AM
Area 51 is a US Airforce base in the Nevada(?) desert, which is well known to conspiracy buffs, UFO researchers, and Roswell believers.
It allegedly houses crashed flying saucers and/or aliens and/or secret gov't UFO experiments.
Agent Scully is the red headed female FBI agent from the TV show The X-Files who is a sceptic,
and a hottie, and often performs autopsies. A Pinwheel eye is ... er... next question!
on cold sonnet by <~> 10 Dec 2002, 8:43 PM
more panegyrics
lovely beautiful brilliant