replying on DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO
19 Dec 2002, 8:28 PM
Drat!
I'll get you someday, LETO!
SOMEDAY!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
(lower curtain)
(end of act 1)
thank you ! thankyou!
Yes, I am quite the thesbian.
I mean, thespenian.
No, thistlepen!
Ack, thestplenisthle!
THESPIAN!
I'll get you someday, LETO!
SOMEDAY!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
(lower curtain)
(end of act 1)
thank you ! thankyou!
Yes, I am quite the thesbian.
I mean, thespenian.
No, thistlepen!
Ack, thestplenisthle!
THESPIAN!
on Chalk by livingcanvas
19 Dec 2002, 8:23 PM
well.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
not bad.
not great, but not bad.
on "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 8:04 PM
"eat my nuts"? I have to listen to that all day at work! I don't want to have to listen to that when I come home to poemranker!
now wheres my dinner? I want kumquats!
now wheres my dinner? I want kumquats!
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
19 Dec 2002, 8:00 PM
its got a beat, you can dance to it,
i give it a top ten, a platinum record,
a million downloads on napster.
booyah grandma, booyah!
i give it a top ten, a platinum record,
a million downloads on napster.
booyah grandma, booyah!
replying on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
19 Dec 2002, 7:58 PM
" You can feel it now, it's in the dirt
Labour Day is drawing near.
A time to sing a shout for joy.
In Bangcock was born a boy."
You're right! I like it better now!
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 7:54 PM
<center><b>I just discovered html!</b></center>
replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 7:53 PM
<b>my tornado has no nose.</b>
<i>how does it smell?</i>
<b>awful!</b>
<i>how does it smell?</i>
<b>awful!</b>
on pee haiku by New Life Drug
19 Dec 2002, 7:50 PM
worthy of a LOL,
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO
but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO
on When Im Gone by New Life Drug
19 Dec 2002, 7:49 PM
Keep working on it. It's starting to shape up nicely.
I love these lines:
"Simply burn the awful words"
"I dare you not to leave my things in the dust"
and
"Oh imagine
The poor furniture"
~sniff~
poor, poor furniture...
I love these lines:
"Simply burn the awful words"
"I dare you not to leave my things in the dust"
and
"Oh imagine
The poor furniture"
~sniff~
poor, poor furniture...
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
19 Dec 2002, 7:41 PM
groovadelic
on THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO
19 Dec 2002, 7:38 PM
One problem: trees are not immortal. They just live a really long time. But don't let that stop you, dude. I wouldn't.
on DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO
19 Dec 2002, 7:36 PM
I counted 20 spelling errors. Do I win a prize? Is he a mad genius or just in need of a spellchecker?
on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus
19 Dec 2002, 7:26 PM
<scottish accent> Grrrreat title. Grrrrrrrrreat. </scottish accent>
replying on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 7:20 PM
athank you. i would post more art there, but I don't currently have access to a scanner.
replying on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 7:18 PM
Good suggestion. You always know the right thing to say. Just like a woman. How do they do that? You make me feel grand.
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 7:14 PM
no, fomented is the right word.
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 8:58 AM
yap, that is what I meant, but the other way does sound a little more sturdy.
on no cure by New Life Drug
18 Dec 2002, 8:55 PM
"there ain't no cure,
there ain't no cure,
there ain't no cure
for love."
-Leonard Cohen
there ain't no cure,
there ain't no cure
for love."
-Leonard Cohen
replying on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
18 Dec 2002, 8:52 PM
Besides playing with line breaks and spacing and punctuation, I added the line
"dustchoked
in the angles,
the wailing
and the whiteness"
and added a "the"
to "final flight"
"dustchoked
in the angles,
the wailing
and the whiteness"
and added a "the"
to "final flight"
Perhaps later.