on some deleted poem
8 Jun 2003, 8:26 AM
A simply beautiful poeme, er poem - im sorry i was not around to see the origional.
on Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom
8 Jun 2003, 5:02 AM
Isnt God alive? oh no ive been living my life with the impresssion he was!
on The other side of a rainbow by thepinkbunnyofdoom
4 Jun 2003, 9:02 AM
I like ur picture - not how i thought ud look at all but hey im not psycic!
on Typical Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 May 2003, 12:40 PM
oh. yeah. sure.
on Dumb Ideas by thepinkbunnyofdoom
3 May 2003, 10:19 AM
The first verse up to the last 2 lines are good, as are the last two verses but the second verse doesnt work really -the first line is good i dont think you need 'groan' in the second line. 'Song' and 'along' ryhme a bit too obviously too. But it is a very good idea and i like the structure and some of the lines are great! especialy the last 2 lines on verses 3 and 4. :o)
on some deleted poem
26 Apr 2003, 2:14 PM
I dont understaand why people are writing wierd things about completion dates and stuff. WHY????? but i feel i must congradulate u on finally getting a wanking award - WHAT TOOK THEM SO FUCKING LONG?
on some deleted poem
26 Apr 2003, 2:20 PM
You are Lord Ganus as well. That is the only hexplanation for ur continuing advertisment of him. GOOD POEM THO!
on some deleted poem
23 Apr 2003, 1:53 PM
Settle!!! why on earth did u change ur name to dark angel? This is going to be seroisly confusing for everone now you know!!
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2003, 7:06 AM
I didnt say anything about dancing!
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2003, 5:13 AM
oooooh thats not bad at all!
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
19 Apr 2003, 5:19 AM
yeah its very good. but then you are
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2003, 6:40 AM
(Groan) Dont start. I dont think i am able to define what is and isnt a poem - i merely question it.
on Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger
18 Apr 2003, 7:11 AM
OOOOH yay a poem by you that i like! well done! -8- (i am stingey - but its a very high 8!)
on Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger
18 Apr 2003, 7:15 AM
And YOU ARE jesus! he is!
on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 Apr 2003, 1:29 PM
Kinda cRaZy but then i guess thats the whole point huh?
Sometimes on this site i start to wonder how at what point does something stop being a poem and just because the writer says its a poem does that mean it actually is or is it just some words strung together?
just a thought.
Sometimes on this site i start to wonder how at what point does something stop being a poem and just because the writer says its a poem does that mean it actually is or is it just some words strung together?
just a thought.
on Looking Down by thepinkbunnyofdoom
14 Apr 2003, 2:03 PM
Wow it makes a lot more sense now!
on The Outcry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
4 Jun 2003, 9:00 AM
The last line makes it.
on I must be out of my mind by thepinkbunnyofdoom
10 May 2003, 5:55 AM
Haha yeah
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2003, 5:10 AM
er YEAH DAMN RIGHT