on KAT 2 by nentwined
7 Jun 2003, 3:03 AM
My name is kat can it be about me? (o:
on The other side of a rainbow by thepinkbunnyofdoom
4 Jun 2003, 9:02 AM
I like ur picture - not how i thought ud look at all but hey im not psycic!
on The Outcry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
4 Jun 2003, 9:00 AM
The last line makes it.
on Typical Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 May 2003, 12:40 PM
oh. yeah. sure.
on I must be out of my mind by thepinkbunnyofdoom
10 May 2003, 5:55 AM
Haha yeah
on Dumb Ideas by thepinkbunnyofdoom
3 May 2003, 10:19 AM
The first verse up to the last 2 lines are good, as are the last two verses but the second verse doesnt work really -the first line is good i dont think you need 'groan' in the second line. 'Song' and 'along' ryhme a bit too obviously too. But it is a very good idea and i like the structure and some of the lines are great! especialy the last 2 lines on verses 3 and 4. :o)
replying on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8
20 Apr 2003, 4:53 AM
I think his name is spelt Ashton Kutcher
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Apr 2003, 7:19 AM
Oh so ive had a sex change now! great!
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Apr 2003, 7:12 AM
I also have no cloggs im afraid.
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Apr 2003, 7:03 AM
FINE I will now go and cry in a corner as your vast intellect is proving too much for my young mind to cope with.
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Apr 2003, 6:50 AM
You dont like the word 'defined' do ya?! But, in this case i agree. ok?
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
19 Apr 2003, 5:19 AM
yeah its very good. but then you are
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Apr 2003, 5:03 AM
I guess what im asking here is 'should pieces like this, even though they have been defined (by DA in this case) as not a 'poem' stil be submitted as one and just because something doesnt fit the convectional description of a poem does that mean it does not count as one?' I think this is a good piece of work - but im just interested at how can some of the stuff that is submitted on this site be called poetry? Im not referring to your work here because you obviously put a lot effort into urs to make them good but rather some other users who submit stuff that blatently isnt poetry and then call it just that!
Sorry if i pissed u off. x
Sorry if i pissed u off. x
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Apr 2003, 4:54 AM
Do i detect a note of sarcasm there?
on Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger
18 Apr 2003, 7:15 AM
And YOU ARE jesus! he is!
on Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger
18 Apr 2003, 7:11 AM
OOOOH yay a poem by you that i like! well done! -8- (i am stingey - but its a very high 8!)
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
18 Apr 2003, 3:05 AM
Oh dark angel always knows exactly what to say - he never ceases to amaze me!
I suppose by ur definition this could either be or not be a poem since although it is "imaginative" and i guess there are metaphors, there is no rhyme to be seen, this is hardly in verse which would make it prose, im not sure of the beauty of the language or the experiance of which you are describing. Therefore i think its completely justified that i questioned the fact of it being a poem. Good day! x
I suppose by ur definition this could either be or not be a poem since although it is "imaginative" and i guess there are metaphors, there is no rhyme to be seen, this is hardly in verse which would make it prose, im not sure of the beauty of the language or the experiance of which you are describing. Therefore i think its completely justified that i questioned the fact of it being a poem. Good day! x
on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 Apr 2003, 1:29 PM
Kinda cRaZy but then i guess thats the whole point huh?
Sometimes on this site i start to wonder how at what point does something stop being a poem and just because the writer says its a poem does that mean it actually is or is it just some words strung together?
just a thought.
Sometimes on this site i start to wonder how at what point does something stop being a poem and just because the writer says its a poem does that mean it actually is or is it just some words strung together?
just a thought.
on Looking Down by thepinkbunnyofdoom
14 Apr 2003, 2:03 PM
Wow it makes a lot more sense now!