on Spring Rolls by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 8:37 AM
Ive seen this one before too. it doesnt really speak to me im afraid
on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 8:36 AM
I have commented on lots of your poems that were similar to these but i see you like to reedit quite a lot and i forget what they were like in the first place! but this is funny and seriously random which is alwayys a good thing! X
on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 8:32 AM
very good! 8
on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2003, 1:26 PM
Bit strange, at least your work is varied!
on We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2003, 1:23 PM
Nice
on oh it hurt so much by w~* ATHENA *~w
2 Apr 2003, 12:58 PM
trayburn
on Hidden Meaning by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:41 AM
Bit diffferent to ur other stuff - wow metaphors and everything- you will become a poet yet oh PBofD! 9
on Ment to be confusing by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:37 AM
Also good - i think your work is very interesting, parts are brilliant, parts shite but definatly lots of potential, makes me feel sad to read them so god knows how u feel
on Heart Made of Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:34 AM
well i like this poem - bit cliched (cant spell) but thats poetry for you - its nice to read someones poetry who seems to have the same problems as me but worse! ;o)
on Who am I? by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:30 AM
Does anyone ever understand anything Daniella says? on the fourth line from the end do you mean hallow or shallow? Its often best not to wonder who-am-i because the answer always seems to be i-am-nothing!
on Thanks For The Brain Damage by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:24 AM
yeah i know what u mean - well metaphorically anyway. Its the way some people can make u feel they often dont realise they are doing it or they do it on purpose because they want to hurt you and it works
on Night And Day by MuDvAyNe
16 Mar 2003, 2:05 PM
hahahaha i dont gettit oh well 10 since i give all ur work 10 coz its good
on Fate by Dostoyevsky
16 Mar 2003, 1:54 PM
bit random stamp deary - its all a bit hopeless nowadays huh?
on Blinded by Dostoyevsky
13 Mar 2003, 2:20 PM
yay wonderfully good i love it
on Past by Dostoyevsky
11 Mar 2003, 1:46 PM
heres a grade coz u have none yet- why dont u re do blinded also- it is one of my favorite poems u know!
on Past by Dostoyevsky
13 Feb 2003, 2:31 PM
very lovely i like the wording-i did post that poem i showed u by the way
on "last needle" by nolan
12 Feb 2003, 1:54 PM
This is so similar to how i often feel- im amazed