on For you, I'd make meatloaf by Venus
13 Feb 2003, 9:00 PM
Clever. The use of food is brilliant. Food symbolism is wondrous.
on Atonement by aperfecttool77
18 Feb 2003, 1:51 PM
I'm sorry you were conceived, mr.tool. I speak that utterly sincerely. the world would be just a little sunnier if not only that poeme, but you and everything connected to you didn't exist. BOO! Boo-urns!
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2003, 6:28 AM
Lesbians are hardly outside the comprehension of society. They've been a prominent-ish fixture since Sappho and right on until now. No one sees them as outre anymore. They're used as a standard device to seem kinky and hot by the media. All that said, that is really shab lesbian poeme. Did nothin' for me.
on Forbidden Fruit by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Feb 2003, 6:38 AM
This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.
on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 8:47 PM
if you tried to edit it, you failed miserably.(b),that is the most shab-ass grade school attempt at a comeback I've ever read. worse than the rubber/glue thing. The poeme is bad. face it. last, I will continue to rank how I choose, sir.
on some deleted poem
14 Feb 2003, 9:43 AM
Yes, as limonade and I are compiling them using the format of the vagina monologues and interviewing assorted penis-bearers. so don't take our feckin' ideas or i'll cutcha.
on Weekend at the Taj by <~>
19 Feb 2003, 1:27 PM
Fantastic. just fantastic.
on Eros, and Psycho by horus8
21 Feb 2003, 6:34 AM
peculiar. i can dig it.
on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 1:35 PM
I'm sorry.
on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 10:46 AM
You can eat the kids too. Use the same recipes as for pork, but apparently the palms of the hands are particularly good fried. On the whole, though, you can't go wrong with stir-frying. NEVER eat human brains, though.
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Feb 2003, 10:42 AM
Groovin'. Chive-tastic. All I get is the drunk/junkie homeless doing their thing in the graveyard across the street from my place. Maybe I should offer chives?
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 10:37 AM
If there's anything this world needs more, it's Batman scat slash. Hell with this love that the others talk about.
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Feb 2003, 10:32 AM
Well, I'm amused. Soap-droppingly good.
on Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Feb 2003, 9:44 AM
the first was the best.
on Crucifixion by Mr Pig
21 Feb 2003, 6:35 AM
mighty good. clever.
on Options (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 10:44 AM
Delightful.
on Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 1:54 PM
Nice story, good use of a moral. Solid.
on Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage
17 Feb 2003, 6:30 AM
Pretty damn good.
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2003, 6:34 AM
sounds like militant angst.