on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2003, 1:15 PM
that's awful. but funny.
on Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom
10 Feb 2003, 12:56 PM
you are such a CUUUUUTE little thing. I wrote more perversions for you.
on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 12:50 PM
When (1) + man(1) + uses(2) + a(1) + flame(1)= 6. (a)You can't count, assmachine. (b)Dumb statement worthy only of "proverbs for dummies" books. (c)Poorly written, overall. Therefore, a zero.
on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 12:52 PM
Chirpe, indeede. Trying to be meaningful and deep, but comes out like a puddle of hedgehog piss. Fail.
on Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 12:53 PM
Milk is gross.
on Curse by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 12:56 PM
Childish rhyme scheme, boring mssage. Did you keep repeating "poet" so much to convince yourself that you actually are one? Man, I'm glad I don't have to worry about a poet's cusre. Oh, The Pain (tm) of onefingeruphiass's Deep Inexpressible Feelings(tm)!
on The Boys and Girls Club of London by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 12:59 PM
this had potential until the use of 'bod' to rhyme with "god". I had to take a break to finish giggling.
on Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 1:01 PM
I certainly don't dispute that statement.
on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger
13 Feb 2003, 1:05 PM
Kind of all over the place. The lines "hurl lettuces
And fairies
They cast a spell at me" cracked me up, though.
And fairies
They cast a spell at me" cracked me up, though.
on Languageing by ==Doylum
13 Feb 2003, 1:14 PM
neato.
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
13 Feb 2003, 1:21 PM
impressive images.
on some deleted poem
13 Feb 2003, 1:26 PM
nice one. I love the "roam my cortex" bit. I love it more than I love toast.
on Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer
13 Feb 2003, 1:27 PM
true.
on Boddhistava by Enki
13 Feb 2003, 10:40 AM
This thing made me think of the song "Obey the Cow God" by green jelly. but the poeme rocked less.
on some deleted poem
12 Feb 2003, 1:06 PM
Delightful, hun. My favourite is the Freud one.
on Lindsey's Ballad by thepinkbunnyofdoom
11 Feb 2003, 9:54 AM
There's a lot of cliche in the language ("caged bird")bit, but if you polished it a little, it could be good.
on Magick Fingers of Love by Wulf
10 Feb 2003, 9:49 AM
Well that was an experience. a wise-ish man once said "those who spell magic with a 'k' aren't." I agree.