poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bobjim (21-40)

Comments byBobjim, 21–40 back. Include replies

on A Glass of Milk Inagodadavida by EAger to Offend 12 Dec 2004, 1:09 PM
odd
on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 5:14 PM
weird
Weird enough to merit a 5.
on The Sparky by RGSsparky 12 Nov 2004, 3:05 AM
I found this poem entertaining
Considering who wrote it it's amazing
I've never ever seen such rhyming
Here's a 10 for your great poeming
Wahey!!!
I haven't seen a poemwanker award since mine got taken away. Congratulations!
Maybe I should get mine back to boost the numbers...
on Mobile Phones by RGSsparky 15 Nov 2004, 8:09 AM
I sense a lot of rage coming out in this poem. Perhaps you should consider some of my never-fail calming techniques.
For you, I would suggest finding the biggest, cheapest, ugliest mobile phone around, buying 10 of them, and destroying them in interesting ways.
Alternatively, send this poem to every mobile phone company's customer services e-mail address.
on Dino's by RGSsparky 15 Nov 2004, 8:11 AM
I feel this could have been taken further. Why not describe the clientele in intimate, if incorrect, detail.
on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2004, 8:16 AM
Simply because I like the philosophy behind this, 7.
But because I like the poem itself, you actually get a 10.
on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2004, 8:18 AM
Maybe I'm reading this badly, but I get very little sense of depth.
My God, what's happening, a completely serious thought on a poem from me!?! The end of the world is nigh!
on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 16 Nov 2004, 9:11 AM
Psh
on some deleted poem 18 Nov 2004, 7:29 AM
Is there any particular reason for the religious nature of your recent poems, or do you just find it a nice subject to write about?
Anyway, like it lots, have another 10.
on Feminist? by RGSsparky 17 Nov 2004, 3:27 AM
Love it.
But really, it's too good.
You'll never get your orange wings like this.
on The Supreme Mind by Bobjim 17 Nov 2004, 8:56 AM
Bobjim's making a comeback.

Oh yeah.
on some deleted poem 18 Nov 2004, 7:30 AM
Puts me in mind of the Lightning Seeds: Sugar Coated Iceberg, can't think why.
on Mice by MacFrantic 18 Nov 2004, 7:33 AM
Here's an alternate ending:

This dubious poem is not that great,
I think I'll go and masturbate.
I like this. I don't have to try and find any meaning in it and it's completely random.
on some deleted poem 18 Nov 2004, 7:36 AM
Where do all the egotistical people come into this.
on some deleted poem 18 Nov 2004, 7:37 AM
I came.
I saw.
I decided not to bother reading it.
on Last dance at the lake by Caducus 18 Nov 2004, 7:39 AM
10
on Matthew's Bastard by Caducus 9 Dec 2004, 3:33 PM
1The name was interesting, but it was too long to read properly.