regarding some deleted poem...	21-Aug-02/3:55 PM
babbit- this is wonderful.
Re: World Crashes Down by SoulSlippedAway	20-Aug-02/4:19 PM
this is rather disjointed. you may want to fix the spelling mistake in your title :)
Re: Work by poetandknowit	27-Aug-02/6:55 PM
one of the best things on this site. 11.
Re: Chuds in the mall by razorgrin	19-Aug-02/5:39 PM
crap??? i thought it was hilarious!
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Aug-02/8:45 PM
is 'defouling' a word?
Re: Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen	14-Aug-02/6:52 PM
thanks for the kind words, tarquin! i am not a guy, by the way :)
Re: visitation by Nicholas Jones	19-Aug-02/8:05 PM
the form is utterly distracting.
Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit	19-Aug-02/7:26 PM
poet, worthy of printing out and sticking on my wall.
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Aug-02/9:05 AM
i liked this, especially the 'spring' verse. that other guy used 'fuck' so many times in his uh, comment/tirade, nobody else has to for at least a week.
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	18-Aug-02/9:29 AM
leaving the sentiment expressed aside.. this stinks. i've read several of your works and comments. given the way you have represented yourself in this particular forum,i hope you are considering therapy and unplugging your computer for an extended period of time. you can dish it out, but you can't take it.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Aug-02/5:04 PM
would have been a 10 but that line 'the lonesome buzz of redundancy', well how do i say this politely? oh yah it sucked :) so i gave it a 9. i really loved this. well structured, well written.
Re: untitled 2 by yOum|n	8-Aug-02/3:43 PM
way too long. you could have gotten the point across with less.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Jul-02/7:09 PM
how special of you to post copyrighted material on this or any other site.
Re: Dispersion by timfowler	19-Jul-02/7:14 PM
'pulled apart strand by strand' - liked it.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Jul-02/7:16 PM
i don't like the rhymes, but it made me cry anyway. seriously.
Re: the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o	19-Jul-02/7:24 PM
laid... not layed, unless that was intentional.
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	18-Aug-02/10:01 AM
thank you for so quickly and effectively proving my point with your own words :)
Re: Strange but true by ==Doylum	18-Aug-02/10:06 AM
genius? maybe not - but funny as hell.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	27-Mar-05/1:48 AM
::gasp:: in the best possible way. some of this has been done before, and bits done better, and some of the phrase could use tweaking. as a whole, it's damn near perfect and that's my opinion.
Re: Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams	27-Mar-05/1:52 AM
i liked it very much. hon,you have to have a thick skin to let other people read your stuff :-)