on Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams
27 Mar 2005, 1:52 AM
i liked it very much. hon,you have to have a thick skin to let other people read your stuff :-)
on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
27 Mar 2005, 1:48 AM
::gasp::
in the best possible way. some of this has been done before, and bits done better, and some of the phrase could use tweaking. as a whole, it's damn near perfect and that's my opinion.
in the best possible way. some of this has been done before, and bits done better, and some of the phrase could use tweaking. as a whole, it's damn near perfect and that's my opinion.
on Work by poetandknowit
27 Aug 2002, 6:55 PM
one of the best things on this site. 11.
on World Crashes Down by SoulSlippedAway
20 Aug 2002, 4:19 PM
this is rather disjointed. you may want to fix the spelling mistake in your title :)
on visitation by Nicholas Jones
19 Aug 2002, 8:05 PM
the form is utterly distracting.
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
19 Aug 2002, 7:26 PM
poet, worthy of printing out and sticking on my wall.
on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin
19 Aug 2002, 5:39 PM
crap??? i thought it was hilarious!
on Strange but true by ==Doylum
18 Aug 2002, 10:06 AM
genius? maybe not - but funny as hell.
on Black Buns by Bachus
18 Aug 2002, 10:01 AM
thank you for so quickly and effectively proving my point with your own words :)
on Black Buns by Bachus
18 Aug 2002, 9:29 AM
leaving the sentiment expressed aside.. this stinks. i've read several of your works and comments. given the way you have represented yourself in this particular forum,i hope you are considering therapy and unplugging your computer for an extended period of time. you can dish it out, but you can't take it.
on Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Aug 2002, 9:05 AM
i liked this, especially the 'spring' verse. that other guy used 'fuck' so many times in his uh, comment/tirade, nobody else has to for at least a week.
on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen
14 Aug 2002, 6:52 PM
thanks for the kind words, tarquin! i am not a guy, by the way :)
on untitled 2 by yOum|n
8 Aug 2002, 3:43 PM
way too long. you could have gotten the point across with less.
on the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o
19 Jul 2002, 7:24 PM
laid... not layed, unless that was intentional.
on Dispersion by timfowler
19 Jul 2002, 7:14 PM
'pulled apart strand by strand' - liked it.
on all sex by roses are read
19 Jul 2002, 7:07 PM
i will get right to the point: holy shit. wow.
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros
15 Jul 2002, 6:09 PM
you must go through a lot of hand lotion.
on For Mukhtaran Bibi in Pakistan by pkdrunner
14 Jul 2002, 6:18 PM
powerfully emotional, but it needs work, a bit disjointed in both stanzas. to the other poster: she was a woman who was gang raped to punish her family because her brother was seen walking with a girl from another caste. yes its recent.
on YOU BELONG TO ME by NATALIO
14 Jul 2002, 8:35 AM
is this a formatting error, or did you mean to type one gigantic sentence to hugely scroll across my screen? in caps, no less.