on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2002, 3:55 PM
babbit- this is wonderful.
on World Crashes Down by SoulSlippedAway
20 Aug 2002, 4:19 PM
this is rather disjointed. you may want to fix the spelling mistake in your title :)
on Work by poetandknowit
27 Aug 2002, 6:55 PM
one of the best things on this site. 11.
on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin
19 Aug 2002, 5:39 PM
crap??? i thought it was hilarious!
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2002, 8:45 PM
is 'defouling' a word?
on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen
14 Aug 2002, 6:52 PM
thanks for the kind words, tarquin! i am not a guy, by the way :)
on visitation by Nicholas Jones
19 Aug 2002, 8:05 PM
the form is utterly distracting.
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
19 Aug 2002, 7:26 PM
poet, worthy of printing out and sticking on my wall.
on Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Aug 2002, 9:05 AM
i liked this, especially the 'spring' verse. that other guy used 'fuck' so many times in his uh, comment/tirade, nobody else has to for at least a week.
on Black Buns by Bachus
18 Aug 2002, 9:29 AM
leaving the sentiment expressed aside.. this stinks. i've read several of your works and comments. given the way you have represented yourself in this particular forum,i hope you are considering therapy and unplugging your computer for an extended period of time. you can dish it out, but you can't take it.
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2002, 5:04 PM
would have been a 10 but that line 'the lonesome buzz of redundancy', well how do i say this politely? oh yah it sucked :) so i gave it a 9. i really loved this. well structured, well written.
on untitled 2 by yOum|n
8 Aug 2002, 3:43 PM
way too long. you could have gotten the point across with less.
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2002, 7:09 PM
how special of you to post copyrighted material on this or any other site.
on Dispersion by timfowler
19 Jul 2002, 7:14 PM
'pulled apart strand by strand' - liked it.
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2002, 7:16 PM
i don't like the rhymes, but it made me cry anyway. seriously.
on the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o
19 Jul 2002, 7:24 PM
laid... not layed, unless that was intentional.
on Black Buns by Bachus
18 Aug 2002, 10:01 AM
thank you for so quickly and effectively proving my point with your own words :)
on Strange but true by ==Doylum
18 Aug 2002, 10:06 AM
genius? maybe not - but funny as hell.
on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
27 Mar 2005, 1:48 AM
::gasp::
in the best possible way. some of this has been done before, and bits done better, and some of the phrase could use tweaking. as a whole, it's damn near perfect and that's my opinion.
in the best possible way. some of this has been done before, and bits done better, and some of the phrase could use tweaking. as a whole, it's damn near perfect and that's my opinion.
on Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams
27 Mar 2005, 1:52 AM
i liked it very much. hon,you have to have a thick skin to let other people read your stuff :-)