on rain by skinda
26 Nov 2002, 12:18 PM
rather trite. rather redundant. try for fresher images.
on Damn chickens by ciantu
25 Nov 2002, 10:24 AM
I like chicken.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 7:34 AM
captivating.
on Smoking Clitoris with PHD handles by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Nov 2002, 10:23 AM
lovely.
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 6:59 AM
perplexing.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 7:31 AM
how fun. I don't know whay it is fun, but it is.
on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
18 Dec 2002, 6:46 AM
a nice poem to read to your family. maybe you could make a christmas special, charlie brown...
on FHjk by Dark Angle
10 Dec 2002, 11:39 AM
have you tried Viagra?
on Basic comedy by Garrett S Sexton
5 Dec 2002, 6:15 AM
craftless.
on Society by Garrett S Sexton
5 Dec 2002, 6:18 AM
Let's not confuse vulgarity with art.
on The Spankbox by Garrett S Sexton
5 Dec 2002, 7:30 AM
the last line is inconsistant and base. it interrupts the flow and tone.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 10:28 AM
was the test on poetry?
on A meeting at Maverick, then dinner. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Nov 2002, 10:31 AM
haiku?
on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird
22 Nov 2002, 10:49 AM
O excellent!
on Sod this! This poem can't rhyme for toffee... by Yardbird
22 Nov 2002, 7:36 AM
who liked to drive on the autobahn.
he killed lots of deer,
as they stood there in fear!
and often he'd swerve for the lesser fawn.
....hope I helped :)
he killed lots of deer,
as they stood there in fear!
and often he'd swerve for the lesser fawn.
....hope I helped :)
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 6:44 AM
made me think of star trek. maybe its the doors.
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 11:44 AM
I like it a lot. nicely done.