on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 7:42 AM
so did he explode? if it ended all others...
on Tom and Jerry by WarrenGDawg
17 Sep 2002, 7:19 AM
the cliche title may weaken this...
on Tennesee Waterfall by razorgrin
17 Sep 2002, 7:20 AM
9 points for making me smile--plus one for adding to my vocabulary.."tennessee waterfall" is a perfect description...
on Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi
17 Sep 2002, 7:21 AM
your cliche title weakens your poem
on Pork by AEcutee1435
17 Sep 2002, 7:46 AM
perhaps too simple....
on Worldly Wise by anitawit
22 Nov 2002, 7:12 AM
the ONLY word I don't thnik fits is "scruples". It seems out of character. Otherwise, I liked it a lot--a 10.
on Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus
17 Sep 2002, 7:32 AM
when you were a kid, did you play pinata with hornet's nests? it seems that your goal is only to illicit a negative response. if that was your intention--you have found success.
on A-Team, vol I by Agemo-Z
17 Sep 2002, 7:34 AM
I pity the fool that gives this a bad rating!
on Moon and Azalea by Aidaho
17 Sep 2002, 7:43 AM
excellent. most excellent.
on Chew your food! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Sep 2002, 7:49 AM
it almost meant something---
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 7:50 AM
sounds like a kid i knew once. big mouth, bad teeth.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 7:55 AM
that's the story of my life. very succinct. bravo.
on Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog
17 Sep 2002, 7:22 AM
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on Devil, BEWARE!!! by gay
17 Sep 2002, 7:26 AM
I failed math.
on S by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
17 Sep 2002, 7:29 AM
perplexingly violent.
on Spring Haiku by Staika
17 Sep 2002, 7:30 AM
effective simile. good show.