on #12 by mikejedw
17 Sep 2002, 6:20 AM
nicely done once again
on Uninformed, pseudo-philosophical thoughts about existence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
17 Sep 2002, 7:07 AM
an effective, whimsical title.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 6:16 AM
very nice indeed. keenly perceptive and succinct.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 6:16 AM
very nice indeed. keenly perceptive and succinct.
on Fire (a haiku series) by eviltwin
17 Sep 2002, 7:10 AM
excellent.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 7:11 AM
been there. I had to rubber-band my thumb with a paper towel to apply direct pressure as I drove myself to the hospital for stitches.
on my needs by itchiwitch
17 Sep 2002, 7:17 AM
a bit vague--but nice
on God and Country by dougsoderstrom
17 Sep 2002, 5:56 AM
interesting variation of line length.
on Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Sep 2002, 5:57 AM
vile. an assassination of an art form.
on Dick Cheney, Man of Tomorrow by bondjedi
17 Sep 2002, 5:58 AM
it has a real "boot scootin' boogie" feel to it.
on What is Black by ivoryangie1
17 Sep 2002, 6:01 AM
nice freeform--perhaps mislabeled as haiku?
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 6:04 AM
nicely done.
on Master Chef by Takay Shitar
17 Sep 2002, 6:05 AM
a hunger inducing poem. I like my sausage burnt, too.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 6:08 AM
I strongly believe that one should not judge a poet's personal life and attitudes based on the poem--that poetry can be as separate from the poet as it can be an intimate reflection of the inner soul.
That said- I still think this is crap and you should be ashamed of yourself.
That said- I still think this is crap and you should be ashamed of yourself.
on High Speed College Life by Modulo
17 Sep 2002, 6:17 AM
not sure about the ";"
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 6:18 AM
nicely stated. I too have grown sick of the overabundance of lark's vomit.
on Cosmic Imbalance by Modulo
17 Sep 2002, 5:59 AM
OK