on Pinjur by Shardik
21 May 2003, 10:59 AM
in here, you are words and nothingness....
on Whales by Jeremi B. Handrinos
23 May 2003, 10:30 AM
line 1 and two rhyming is a distraction. haiku 2 and three are freakin' awesome, worth a doubloon apeice.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:36 AM
for some reason i thought that this was about visiting a psychologist or a doctor of some sort. perhaps it is the eerie, sterile tone. fascinating.
on All A Mistake by Alyssa91
21 May 2003, 10:42 AM
an odd mix of trite and confusion. the cancer donation has me wondering.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:50 AM
witty.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:51 AM
My grandfather had three hands. he looked funny, but Boy! could he pick apples!
on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones
21 May 2003, 10:57 AM
even funner would be to be a homosexual invalid in nazi germany.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2003, 10:58 AM
not sure about the "?", but that happens with formatting.
on Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 May 2003, 11:02 AM
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on More from unlucky janitors by Bachus
21 May 2003, 11:12 AM
creepy. well done.
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
21 May 2003, 11:15 AM
nice.
on She'll never know by colndodg
21 May 2003, 11:00 AM
it is like licking a spoon after stirring baking soda.
on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni
21 May 2003, 11:01 AM
5
9
5
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it is more than shit. it is also more than a haiku.
9
5
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it is more than shit. it is also more than a haiku.
on Jokie Smurf by Bachus
21 May 2003, 11:04 AM
yee haw.
on The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus
21 May 2003, 11:05 AM
an i'm sure king midas is good at making trophies.
on The disfigured BlackSmith is loved by <{Baba^Yaga}>
21 May 2003, 11:07 AM
nice.
on All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin
21 May 2003, 11:10 AM
intriguing.
on The canary's last song by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 May 2003, 10:28 AM
very warner brothers. nicely done.