on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 7:05 PM
i leave for twenty minutes to go to the bath house and svitz a little, and look what you've done...ah?, i think it's very expressive ewerr..i'm relly quite overwhelmed ah..let's see i enjoyed all of it..the clear channel part was funny and the end and beginning were quite crafty... the language mixes are intimate..since i'm german, columbian and greek..also it's not an ode (thank god) and it has to do with alot more than just me, so i am flattered.. i guess to be a part of it all. either that or i'm a fool to comment at all. probably both. 10..i give you this ten for content not title..he he.
on How the Mighty Fall by jdsnyd
9 Dec 2002, 10:13 PM
this felt like conan pushing that wheel and making that huge rut with his little boy legs...but then cut too..arnold yes! 10.
on oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~>
10 Dec 2002, 9:42 AM
To Oedipus!e
on this tuesday morning by teacup
10 Dec 2002, 11:56 AM
i think you have concrete confused with cement.???
on falling by Aggreddion
10 Dec 2002, 11:57 AM
there is no bottom at the top.??
on Acknowledgement* by Sigh'ense...
10 Dec 2002, 11:58 AM
nifty.i
on uninvited guests by teacup
10 Dec 2002, 12:01 PM
sweet water melon seeds they're everywhere!e
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 12:06 PM
oddly dismal, yet compitent..you were right to put the italian version first. it's more potent than the english one.
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 12:08 PM
he shouldn't of put his potty stick there. hugh?
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 6:09 PM
have you read the master and marguerrite? by michael bulgakov? have a ten.e
on en el tiempo que era nina by daniella
10 Dec 2002, 6:14 PM
i have to agree wth d.a and gw (we were giggling about it while she was at my house just now) on this one, both of your attempts at spanish are umm well, whatever. better luck next time. have an eight for christmas.e
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 6:30 PM
my audition went well. better than i expected. whether i get it or not i'll sleep good tonight.h
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 6:38 PM
an inner jubilee that has yet to touch my extremities..
on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT
10 Dec 2002, 6:48 PM
don't be afraid to suck the laST sentence into the last stanza it fits fine. no osterization needed..
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 6:50 PM
the lone strangeling hath spaken! 10.t
on just plain orange by New Life Drug
10 Dec 2002, 8:50 PM
i miss orange juilius' somethin fierce and a double double with cheese (monster style) with grilled onions...like, to go with dude. big time.l