on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 9:34 PM
this is splendid, but perhaps i am a bit over-read on the crow,shadow, winter, river..topics of late. then again, i do comment on alot of poetry.
on When Im Gone by New Life Drug
10 Dec 2002, 9:44 PM
stop at winter air, than say open my shutters for the sun.also, try to compromise the integrity of some of your adjectives...think neutral but crisp and light like foil, a taoist with telepathic abilities.t
on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Dec 2002, 2:55 PM
i'll put your opinion right next to my guitar pick collection. To be lost in the dulling colors and teeth marks. here let me help you out, i'll give myself a zero and take your critic to my eyebrows like a straight-razor cuz that's how fucking much i care about what you think mr. poetry.
on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 4:37 PM
first off, it's too ummm confessional.
on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 4:45 PM
secondly,the biggest confessional of all time...here i'm leaving this fruit cake for the holidays at your altar..it's my aunts recipe.one dash miles bettween us, a sprinkle of endless sea..steeped in the sun for a week with a pinch of photograph in wallet. vuala 'disinfranchised confessional poetry that's not confessional but still true with just a tinge of metaphorical middle america dustings <the babbit special> enjoy children it goes with coffee and scones along with carolers and snow drifts.t
on father Worked Nights by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 4:53 PM
is it...could it be?...no it couldn't!, but yes..once again 'not confessionally confessional poetry', by none other than..? you got it mr. poetry. not just any normal poem boys and girls but a riveting american staple that you to can purchase at wallmart in the form of a taxidermied mallard with a brass enscribed plaque. thanks uncle charlie! i'll put it right next to the rocket i built last week...say,,will you fire her off with my at the play ground this afternoon uncle charlie..that'd be swell.l
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 5:15 PM
lo and behold, yet again, by confessing children, but the same time not really confessing you achieve the unachievable. 24 tens, from a place where apparently the confessional works by not actually working. hooray. i'm impressed.
on Work by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 5:23 PM
round and round, where we stop nobody knows.oh yeah... at a brief confessional, but look again is it really? yes. but notice how well it's blended into the magic plum sauce.o
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 5:38 PM
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how will i raise the twins?e
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 7:26 PM
how did you know i was wearing orange? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! the curtains...ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on Premarital Sex (Zombie Fantasy) by Sigh'ense...
11 Dec 2002, 7:29 PM
i would end after ejaculated, dal.n
on THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void
11 Dec 2002, 7:31 PM
tron and birdes are fun and beys? well what can i says? they are always fabulous with portebellos and bacon.b
on A hard life by INTRANSIT
11 Dec 2002, 7:34 PM
possibly, holding more meaning than an incubus song.d
on Europeans shouldn't mess with Ronald McDonald because one day he will rule their pathetic "continent" by bondjedi
11 Dec 2002, 7:40 PM
thank god the title isn't better than the haiku, and i thought he did already. they shold have a mutton burger called the mcbleet. the second line is humorous. what kind of vreature is the grimace? exactly.r
on some deleted poem
12 Dec 2002, 12:38 PM
1) i don't blue vote
2) i don't call my friends
so that they might blue vote for me
3) i green vote
4) the difference between a ten and a zero to me is nine other numbers
5)you will find i've giving darkangel as many low blasts as high
6)also, i don't care.
7)reallyd
2) i don't call my friends
so that they might blue vote for me
3) i green vote
4) the difference between a ten and a zero to me is nine other numbers
5)you will find i've giving darkangel as many low blasts as high
6)also, i don't care.
7)reallyd
on trapoide by Angel_of_fait
12 Dec 2002, 12:41 PM
HA! ^%^^&$^&(*^ HA! ARGHHHHH!
on just like the jagged dagger by Angel_of_fait
12 Dec 2002, 12:44 PM
the angels must die whether they are angels of fit or fate...lit or lite. they must BURN!!r
on No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun
13 Dec 2002, 10:17 PM
i want you to know that when i give her a good shove...well..i think of you. every time actually.v