Comments byhorus8, 1321–1340 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Claustrophobia by INTRANSIT 17 Jun 2003, 11:28 AM
"in ) = ( * ^^ @ # > | ) = // &" with "in the reptile section" maybe even change "in " to "from".
on The Thought Of It by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 3:00 PM
Again, you amaze me, incredible awareness here, really.
on She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:58 PM
Ha! cheers!
on The Astronomer's Lament by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:57 PM
Jesus, that hurt.
on The Hand of God by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:54 PM
Snooze button blues. Your symbolism in this piece is definitely beta realm sleep depravation.
on Butcher by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:52 PM
You are unstoppable, you are a master!
on Belongings by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:50 PM
Good god have a Platinum Q-tip awarde, that was simply the best.
on Our New Tongue by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:49 PM
This children is Christof, he is poet, where and when you newbies are not, reap it!

This poem, by the way Christ (if I may use diminutives) is just splendid, have an 8, i actually think it deserves a nine, but since you are an exceptional poet. I can't honestly read all of your poems and give them what they deserve, because then, I believe, I would just be knocking myself out of the top fifteen, and since everyone hates me, it would be impossible to recover my standings, forgive me oh dead composer.
replying on Seven by Dangzter 16 Jun 2003, 1:53 PM
If that's how you behave when under the influence. I suspect you'd be better equipped sober.
on The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602 16 Jun 2003, 1:51 PM
The only thing you have in life is an ace homepage. The rest you stole from kids on the short bus.
on Wounds never to heal by Freethinker1602 16 Jun 2003, 1:46 PM
I liked it up until my left hand turned into a radioactive porta potty and regurgitated blue curdled turds about my work space.
replying on Empty by leviathan 16 Jun 2003, 1:42 PM
Glad to see you so giddy today, as usual.
on Seven by Dangzter 16 Jun 2003, 1:20 PM
Pardon me, but do you have any Grey poupon?
replying on I Offer Me by leviathan 16 Jun 2003, 1:17 PM
That, and feces.
on I Offer Me by leviathan 15 Jun 2003, 6:33 PM
Made my ears pop.
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:21 PM
I want a phone call.
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:19 PM
IT WASN'T MY FAULT! THE VOICES! I THOUGHT IT WAS YOU! But since you don't have any lips and resemble more of an ff pink amoeba I know now I was wrong, forgive me God *Bang*
*BANG*
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:17 PM
That was fun. Whatta I owe ya?
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:15 PM
YOU?! It can't BE!
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:05 PM
"TAKE COVER JESU!!!! WHEN I DIED THEY WERE RIGHT ON MY TAIL!" <From the scratchings of Saint Germaine 'the charismaticly uncommited' in the book of 'robe' chapter 'terry cloth' footnoot "why my sloth has three toes".>