poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Jeremi B. Handrinos (221-240)

Comments byJeremi B. Handrinos, 221–240 back. Include replies

on but i was by nolan 18 Jul 2003, 4:21 PM
but you weren't?
on some deleted poem 20 Jul 2003, 2:32 PM
I almost wept, but then I pulled out of it. Here's
A well earned GQT award. I enjoyed the emotion this poem coaxed out of me, and its lucidity.
on some deleted poem 18 Jul 2003, 4:22 PM
better than the nose of a Parson
on some deleted poem 18 Jul 2003, 3:39 PM
Not too shabby...
on some deleted poem 18 Jul 2003, 4:13 PM
A good title... Anyways, that's a start.
on Mistaken Paradise by DJCARTER 18 Jul 2003, 4:19 PM
Gramaricaly abandoned.
on beyond sences by calilegzzz 18 Jul 2003, 3:17 PM
At first I was going to glue this to my neighbor's face, but then I enjoyed your finally.
on cut yourself by Crakyamuni 20 Jul 2003, 2:43 PM
I would suggest correcting the typo for better votes.
on Slip by Terence 18 Jul 2003, 4:32 PM
GQT.
on some deleted poem 25 Jul 2003, 12:42 AM
True up, word.
on cut yourself by Crakyamuni 20 Jul 2003, 2:42 PM
And there "naver" will be. Sounds like a lovely trip to the barber.
on Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess by Luzr 20 Jul 2003, 6:19 PM
I rather enjoyed, maybe, I'll make it a song.
on The Girl Who Is Gone by BuffysBack419 18 Jul 2003, 4:04 PM
"But she went to there to stay." My friend Vipersna invented this form, you are a thief! Nah, there are some interesting normal reactions to abandonment here, you are not alone, hang on, to this 6.
on Paean by Terence 18 Jul 2003, 3:20 PM
Ahh, isn't that just sweet... now diE! Just kidding.
on Nigger Hole by horus8 18 Jul 2003, 3:26 PM
Must you say that naughty word that has nothing to do with skin color other than 1,ooo's of years of persecution and lies, death, humilty, fear. Because... Even words need to be set free from their sterotypage by generations of unimaginative flesh peddlars.
on some deleted poem 18 Jul 2003, 3:29 PM
After stanza seven... It goes stupid, but up until that point I was thinking 9 all the way, and giggled quite a few times. Very imaginative, I must say. Here's a 7
on Falling Asleep by Miggy 18 Jul 2003, 4:28 PM
How about a ten to move you up the ladder on the 'best' chart? God knows you deserve some respect after this fucking abortion of poetry. 10!
on a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom 16 Jul 2003, 2:03 AM
"There where no pretenses made here" were, Bugger'd. I wont even bother fixing your attempt at spelling 'rhyme'. I can only wonder if god had the same idea when he put you here.
on some deleted poem 16 Jul 2003, 2:09 AM
"by that no hoper horus8" I also feel this line would have a more lasting effect if 'no hoper' was 'sloper'. What do you think?